Do you think parents should be held responsible for their children’s behaviours?
Surely there has been no time in history where the lives of people have changed more dramatically. A quick reflection on a typical day reveals that children’s behavior has always been one of the prominent topics in contemporary discussions. People have always been intrigued to analyze and explain whether parents should be held responsible for the unruly behavior of their children. This essay discusses some of the measures they could take to redress this issue.
One compelling argument in favor of my stance on this issue has to do with the fact that parents tend to be more careful about their children and discipline them when they are blamed for the behavior of their children. This happens because in a desire to avoid future fines, or whatever the penalty the parents face, there is an active incentive to not only intervene in the child’s misbehavior, but also to do so in a timely way. Such interventions from the father or mother usually helps children understand the implication of their action and tames them.
Looking back at the introduction, one could also argue that parents can bring more effective and long-term changes in the behavior of children, and therefore, their involvement in their children’s upbringing is crucial. The reason for this is in order for a child’s misbehavior to be successfully remedied, the child must receive a consistent message on what is appropriate. As a result, a system of parental investment will ensure that there is someone closely watching and mentoring children enabling them to understand the social norms and values.
Hence based on the arguments above, I want to stress that parents not only become more careful but also do this job more effectively when they are held accountable for how their children behave. Therefore, I believe it is a positive consideration indeed.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, look, so, therefore, as to, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 10.5418719212 133% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 6.10837438424 98% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 8.36945812808 131% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 5.94088669951 135% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 20.9802955665 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 37.0 31.9359605911 116% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 5.75862068966 122% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1566.0 1207.87684729 130% => OK
No of words: 303.0 242.827586207 125% => OK
Chars per words: 5.16831683168 5.00649968141 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17215713816 3.92707691288 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.95277929313 2.71678728327 109% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 139.433497537 123% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.567656765677 0.580463131201 98% => OK
syllable_count: 495.0 379.143842365 131% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 4.6157635468 108% => OK
Article: 4.0 1.56157635468 256% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.931034482759 322% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 3.65517241379 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6551724138 95% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 20.5024630542 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 52.8558705874 50.4703680194 105% => OK
Chars per sentence: 130.5 104.977214359 124% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.25 20.9669160288 120% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.75 7.25397266985 65% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.33497536946 94% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 6.9802955665 143% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 2.75862068966 36% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.358421378639 0.242375264174 148% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.120575287619 0.0925447433944 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.105228637815 0.071462118173 147% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.218922969424 0.151781067708 144% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0296087256917 0.0609392437508 49% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.5 12.6369458128 123% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 53.1260098522 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 10.9458128079 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.0 11.5310837438 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.1 8.32886699507 109% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 55.0591133005 147% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.94827586207 111% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.3980295567 115% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.5123152709 124% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 85.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 76.5 Out of 90
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