Experience is better than book knowledge. Do you agree or disagree?
urely there has been no time in history where the lives of people has changed more dramatically. A quick reflection on a typical day reveals whether experience is more important as compared to bookish knowledge has always been one of the prominent topics in the contemporary discussions. people have always intrigues to analyse and explain whether which one is better. Regarding this, I would say, experience counts more when it is being compared to education.
one compelling argument in favor of my stance on this issue has to do with the fact that experience provides individual with unforgettable knowledge, which is not a case in learning. this is because, experience provides individual with real life experience, therefore, workers is equipped with mental as well as physical observations. As a result, people acquire a skills which can't be gained through learning.
Looking back at the introduction, one could also argue that book knowledge is written by a specific author, sharing his experience. Whereas, if an individual performs operations with his own hands, the results would be far more better. As a case in point, if you want to learn trading in stock market, you can't get perfect in evaluating the market unless you step in into it.
Hence based on the arguments above, we can conclude that experience not only provide us with specific skills but also builds confidence. therefore, I believe that, experience has a more effective result as compared to book knowledge.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, if, look, regarding, so, therefore, well, whereas, as to, as a result, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 10.5418719212 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 6.10837438424 65% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 8.36945812808 24% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 5.94088669951 151% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 20.9802955665 91% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 31.9359605911 100% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 5.75862068966 226% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1257.0 1207.87684729 104% => OK
No of words: 243.0 242.827586207 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.17283950617 5.00649968141 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.94822203886 3.92707691288 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.9085015372 2.71678728327 107% => OK
Unique words: 148.0 139.433497537 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.609053497942 0.580463131201 105% => OK
syllable_count: 395.1 379.143842365 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 4.6157635468 108% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 1.71428571429 233% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.65517241379 27% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6551724138 95% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.5024630542 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.115716198 50.4703680194 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.75 104.977214359 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.25 20.9669160288 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.25 7.25397266985 114% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 15.0 5.33497536946 281% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 6.9802955665 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 2.75862068966 109% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.181366650827 0.242375264174 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0620505295926 0.0925447433944 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0515745408059 0.071462118173 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.106008373401 0.151781067708 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0309317599162 0.0609392437508 51% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 12.6369458128 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 53.1260098522 96% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.9458128079 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.71 11.5310837438 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.59 8.32886699507 103% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 55.0591133005 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.94827586207 111% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.3980295567 96% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.5123152709 124% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 80.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 72.0 Out of 90
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