Medical technology helps to live longer. Is that curse or blessing?
Surely there has been no time in history where the lives of people have changed dramatically. A quick reflection on a typical day reveals medical technology has always been one of the prominent topics in the contemporary discussions. people have always intrigued to analyse and explain effects of medical benefits in our society. Regarding this, I would say people demerits of medical branch is more as compared to its cons.
one compelling argument in favor of my stance on this issue is do with the fact that medical advancement has increase life expectancy of the individuals, which has resulted in increment in old age group population. this has prove to be challenge for government, as running constitution has to manage their proper budget because more population means more consumption of goods and use of services.
Looking back to the introduction , one could also argue that, it has also effected the different labor force along different sectors. To put it into perspective, old labor force in company will not urge the managing group to hire new employees. Therefore, young talents will not be able to grab the opportunity and will eventually effect their future.
Hence, based on the argument above, we can see conclude that medical technology not only disturbs economy of a country but is also considered bane for present generations. Thus, I believe that medical technology can be considered as a curse for our society if not utilized in the right direction.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, if, look, regarding, so, therefore, thus, as to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 10.5418719212 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 6.10837438424 115% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 8.36945812808 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 5.94088669951 101% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 20.9802955665 86% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 31.9359605911 103% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 5.75862068966 208% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1241.0 1207.87684729 103% => OK
No of words: 243.0 242.827586207 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.10699588477 5.00649968141 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.94822203886 3.92707691288 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86213205834 2.71678728327 105% => OK
Unique words: 153.0 139.433497537 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.62962962963 0.580463131201 108% => OK
syllable_count: 406.8 379.143842365 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 4.6157635468 108% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.65517241379 55% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6551724138 87% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.5024630542 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.5068417233 50.4703680194 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.818181818 104.977214359 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.0909090909 20.9669160288 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.90909090909 7.25397266985 81% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 15.0 5.33497536946 281% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 6.9802955665 86% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 2.75862068966 109% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 2.91625615764 69% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.152662343566 0.242375264174 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0557992268833 0.0925447433944 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0554362833545 0.071462118173 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0845656501564 0.151781067708 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0719797260359 0.0609392437508 118% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 12.6369458128 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 53.1260098522 77% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 10.9458128079 120% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.36 11.5310837438 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.69 8.32886699507 104% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 55.0591133005 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.94827586207 111% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.3980295567 104% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.5123152709 105% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.