Our lifestyle can affect our health. How should health/medical department respond to this?
Surely there has been no history where the lives of people has changed more dramatically. A quick reflection on a typical day reveals concern about individual's lifestyle has been one of the prominent topics in the contemporary discussions. people have always intrigued to analyse and explain the impact of health department in regards to this concern. this essay will put emphasis on different ways by which they can improve the physical as well as mental health of an individual.
To begin with, people, health department should start effective campaign providing knowledge to uneducated people regarding the importance of good health. this is due to reason that many people are unaware of having a balanced diet and are are compromising with their health.
Probing further, government run medical department should provide some concession in buying health foods. this is because some individuals are not so financial sound to buy healthy foods, as they are very expensive. As a result, they opt of unhealthy foods regardless of their impact on their health. As a case in point, running organisation in developing countries like India and Bhutan are providing their society members with cheap grains, so they can at least consume a healthy a diet. they also provide them free basic medical assistance which ultimately improves their lifestyle.
Hence, based on the arguments above, we can conclude that health department has a vast impact in improving lifestyle of an individual by providing them with good food as well as basic medical treatment. Therefore, I believe health departments should come forward to improve the life standard of an individual.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, hence, if, regarding, so, therefore, well, at least, as a result, as well as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 10.5418719212 95% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 6.10837438424 115% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 8.36945812808 36% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 5.94088669951 84% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 20.9802955665 95% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 31.9359605911 119% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 5.75862068966 174% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1406.0 1207.87684729 116% => OK
No of words: 265.0 242.827586207 109% => OK
Chars per words: 5.30566037736 5.00649968141 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03470204552 3.92707691288 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81104468696 2.71678728327 103% => OK
Unique words: 157.0 139.433497537 113% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.592452830189 0.580463131201 102% => OK
syllable_count: 432.9 379.143842365 114% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 4.6157635468 152% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.71428571429 175% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.65517241379 27% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6551724138 103% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.5024630542 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.5416249008 50.4703680194 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.153846154 104.977214359 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.3846153846 20.9669160288 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.46153846154 7.25397266985 103% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.33497536946 131% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 6.9802955665 129% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 2.75862068966 72% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 2.91625615764 69% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.279952776019 0.242375264174 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.106317081818 0.0925447433944 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0720606279768 0.071462118173 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.185694066612 0.151781067708 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0383082891871 0.0609392437508 63% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 12.6369458128 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 53.1260098522 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.9458128079 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.52 11.5310837438 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.68 8.32886699507 104% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 55.0591133005 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.94827586207 111% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.3980295567 96% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.5123152709 133% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 85.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 76.5 Out of 90
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.