The internet has transformed the way information is shared and consumed, but it has also created problems that did not exist before. What are the most serious problems associated with the internet and what solutions can you suggest?
Surely there has been no time in history where the lives of people have changed more dramatically. A quick reflection on a typical day reveals the internet has always been one of the prominent topics in the contemporary discussions. people have always been intrigued to analyse and explain the problems due to the internet and the ways to solve them. Regarding this, I believe that it is happening mainly due to unsuitable contents for children as well as online fraud, and it can be solved by adopting the measures mentioned in this essay.
there are several reasons for the problems arising due to the internet. First of all, it has made it easy for children to access potentially dangerous sites. For example, children can easily pretend as adults and register in the sites unsuitable for their age. there is no doubt that this affects their thoughts and development, which is a negative impact for the children and for society. Another reason is that the growth of online fraud and hacking. these days, there are constant news stories about government and company websites that have been hacked, resulting in sensitive information falling into the hands of criminals.
However, there are various steps that we could take to tackle these problems. Firstly, governments could make legislative changes to make it harder for younger people to access dangerous sites by increasing the requirement for the proof of identity. Secondly, parents can closely monitor the activities of their children and restrict their access to certain sites, so that children are not exposed to inappropriate content. A third option would be for companies to improve their onsite it security systems to make fraud and hacking much more difficult by undertaking thorough reviews of their current systems for weaknesses.
Hence, based on the arguments above, I want to stress that the online problems are rising due to inappropriate contents and security loopholes. Nonetheless, we could certainly implement a range of measures mentioned in this essay to mitigate them in a timely manner.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, hence, however, if, nonetheless, regarding, second, secondly, so, third, well, for example, no doubt, as well as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 10.5418719212 142% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 6.10837438424 115% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 8.36945812808 131% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 5.94088669951 151% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 20.9802955665 148% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 41.0 31.9359605911 128% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 5.75862068966 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1741.0 1207.87684729 144% => OK
No of words: 336.0 242.827586207 138% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.18154761905 5.00649968141 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.28139028586 3.92707691288 109% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72686458447 2.71678728327 100% => OK
Unique words: 183.0 139.433497537 131% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.544642857143 0.580463131201 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 545.4 379.143842365 144% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 4.6157635468 108% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.65517241379 27% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 12.6551724138 126% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.5024630542 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.6621447392 50.4703680194 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.8125 104.977214359 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0 20.9669160288 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.875 7.25397266985 122% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.33497536946 94% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 6.9802955665 57% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 12.0 2.75862068966 435% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 2.91625615764 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0752288125149 0.242375264174 31% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0313332874519 0.0925447433944 34% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0498298586166 0.071462118173 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0492847171787 0.151781067708 32% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.030809116572 0.0609392437508 51% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 12.6369458128 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 53.1260098522 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.9458128079 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.76 11.5310837438 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.24 8.32886699507 111% => OK
difficult_words: 97.0 55.0591133005 176% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.94827586207 106% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.3980295567 100% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.5123152709 105% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.1111111111 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 10.0 Out of 90
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