Global problems related to governments and international organizations, what are the problems and what is your opinion?
In recent era there are numerous global problems to name a few Environmental pollution, Population growth, Terrorism, Malnutrition in children, Industrial and radioactive wastage disposal in oceans and so on, Out of the list mentioned critical one which has colossal impact on human and wildlife across the globe is environmental pollution, In this essay I will make a profound analysis on reasons how the problem aroused and suggestions to eradicate it completely.
To start with, the primary reason for environmental pollution is Toxic gas emissions from the industries, additionally hazardous and carbon dioxide gases emitted by public and private transport vehicles. Furthermore, we can also observe that many private owned vehicles are adding major proportion of harmful gases to environment. Moreover, combustion of fossil fuels pollutes environment too. For example, in latest environmental pollution report from BBC, it is published as 76% of environment is at acute level and pollution is increasing at an alarming rate.
As environment pollution is “hard nut to crack”, Both government and International organizations should play foremost role in arresting the environment pollution, Government should start enforcing stringent environmental policies and levy hefty penalties upon breaching rules, furthermore, Industries should work towards leveraging eco-friendly raw material for processing with minimal pollution. Secondly, Organizations should encourage usage of public transportation and carpooling for their staff. Thus, the amount of the vehicle pollution can be minimized.
In a nutshell, I can conclude that environmental pollution is one of the global problems. Both government and international organizations should be united to eradicate the problem from roots.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 407, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'in the latest'.
Suggestion: in the latest
... pollutes environment too. For example, in latest environmental pollution report from BBC...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, thus, for example, to start with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 10.5418719212 104% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 6.10837438424 147% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 8.36945812808 131% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 5.94088669951 50% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 9.0 20.9802955665 43% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 31.9359605911 103% => OK
Nominalization: 23.0 5.75862068966 399% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1542.0 1207.87684729 128% => OK
No of words: 258.0 242.827586207 106% => OK
Chars per words: 5.97674418605 5.00649968141 119% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00778971557 3.92707691288 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.370667078 2.71678728327 124% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 139.433497537 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.639534883721 0.580463131201 110% => OK
syllable_count: 484.2 379.143842365 128% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.9 1.57093596059 121% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.6157635468 65% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 3.65517241379 164% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6551724138 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.5024630542 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 135.968231584 50.4703680194 269% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 154.2 104.977214359 147% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.8 20.9669160288 123% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.7 7.25397266985 120% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.33497536946 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 6.9802955665 43% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 2.75862068966 145% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 2.91625615764 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0983159211909 0.242375264174 41% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0390787787309 0.0925447433944 42% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0597095153396 0.071462118173 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0808827425935 0.151781067708 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.067518836378 0.0609392437508 111% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 19.6 12.6369458128 155% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 20.72 53.1260098522 39% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 6.54236453202 171% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.6 10.9458128079 152% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 17.7 11.5310837438 153% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 11.12 8.32886699507 134% => OK
difficult_words: 102.0 55.0591133005 185% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 30.0 9.94827586207 302% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.3980295567 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.5123152709 114% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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