Rural vs Urban living
Recent days many people are exchanging dialogues about staying in cities rather than living at rural areas, in this essay i will discuss about various advantages when we live in metropolitan cities and opposing factors in rural areas and measures we can take to overcome issues to make more living in rural areas.
There are numerous advantages when living in cities such as better standard of living,Children will have good education, Contemporary facilities with various universities like digital library and research centers, well equipped hospitals and medical facilities with good research centers for continuous advancements on life threatening diseases like cancer, Adding to it much modern technology will be in place ,advanced infrastructure to facilitate the research centers these in turn generate good employment rate and will add up to the economic development of the country.
In contrast at rural areas there will not be much modern technology and very less medical facilities even for a minor ailments people need to rush nearby medical center and there are not many advanced infrastructures in medical centers. So based on these not every discrete is motivated to stay in rural areas and start migrating to cities, To arrest these migration government should take a initiative such as establishing modern infrastructure in rural areas, good medical facilities and transportation these can motivate youth to stay in rural areas also development of tourism will add many jobs in the rural areas and in-turn generate good economy with a better lifestyle for both natives and tourists.
In conclusion these are critical steps that government should start development activities in to so that rural areas can be great places to live.
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| 2018-12-08 | rajeshsamala | 77 | view |
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, so, well, in conclusion, in contrast, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 10.5418719212 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 6.10837438424 196% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 8.36945812808 131% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 5.94088669951 67% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 12.0 20.9802955665 57% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 31.9359605911 138% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 5.75862068966 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1480.0 1207.87684729 123% => OK
No of words: 275.0 242.827586207 113% => OK
Chars per words: 5.38181818182 5.00649968141 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07223819929 3.92707691288 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.91675354455 2.71678728327 107% => OK
Unique words: 146.0 139.433497537 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.530909090909 0.580463131201 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 479.7 379.143842365 127% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 4.6157635468 0% => OK
Article: 0.0 1.56157635468 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 12.6551724138 40% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 55.0 20.5024630542 268% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 155.814505101 50.4703680194 309% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 296.0 104.977214359 282% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 55.0 20.9669160288 262% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 11.0 7.25397266985 152% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.33497536946 131% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 6.9802955665 57% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 2.75862068966 36% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 2.91625615764 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.180523488559 0.242375264174 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.116312061742 0.0925447433944 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0759537723477 0.071462118173 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.131899732502 0.151781067708 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0758535894049 0.0609392437508 124% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 31.4 12.6369458128 248% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 7.19 53.1260098522 14% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 15.9 6.54236453202 243% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 25.9 10.9458128079 237% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 14.81 11.5310837438 128% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.67 8.32886699507 128% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 55.0591133005 136% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 30.5 9.94827586207 307% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 24.0 10.3980295567 231% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 31.0 10.5123152709 295% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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