Imitating celebrities in sports and movies good or bad
Mostly in current contemporary world every individual will get motivated and start imitating celebrities, those can be from either sports or movies, Many people argue that every individual should get motivated by these celebrities but there are some other set of people who argue that imitating celebrities has bad consequences, In this essay I will discuss both sides and draw a plausible conclusion.
Firstly imitating a celebrity is better for individual growth as we can clearly infer that every sport person would definitely worked hard to get to this position, Young stars should get inspired and start focusing on their career goals, Many benefits life economic stability as they were endorsed in many advertisements apart from their regular profession will make them placed at apex. So every person should be inspired by them.
On the other hand the lifestyle of the celebrities will needed huge amount of money their trips to foreign, staying in luxury hotels will needs much investments which can only be affordable for such celebrities where common people cannot afford if we try to imitate them surely an individual will go in deeps debts so in-turn this will make him to think of crime notation.
So in my opinion imitating a celebrity has got both merits and demerits but it should be individual who carefully own the responsibility in which aspects we should imitate celebrity so that young stars will shine in life and career.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, if, so, apart from, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 10.5418719212 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 18.0 6.10837438424 295% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 8.0 8.36945812808 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 5.94088669951 151% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 20.9802955665 110% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 31.9359605911 78% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 5.75862068966 35% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1216.0 1207.87684729 101% => OK
No of words: 238.0 242.827586207 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.10924369748 5.00649968141 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.92775363542 3.92707691288 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70029173493 2.71678728327 99% => OK
Unique words: 143.0 139.433497537 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.600840336134 0.580463131201 104% => OK
syllable_count: 387.9 379.143842365 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 4.6157635468 22% => OK
Article: 0.0 1.56157635468 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.65517241379 55% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 12.6551724138 40% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 47.0 20.5024630542 229% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 136.221877832 50.4703680194 270% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 243.2 104.977214359 232% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 47.6 20.9669160288 227% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 14.6 7.25397266985 201% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.33497536946 94% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 6.9802955665 57% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 2.75862068966 36% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 2.91625615764 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.192569789466 0.242375264174 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.105731915975 0.0925447433944 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0666943559199 0.071462118173 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.129237703614 0.151781067708 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0480598207233 0.0609392437508 79% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 26.4 12.6369458128 209% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 23.77 53.1260098522 45% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 15.9 6.54236453202 243% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 21.6 10.9458128079 197% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.25 11.5310837438 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.55 8.32886699507 115% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 55.0591133005 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 33.0 9.94827586207 332% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 20.8 10.3980295567 200% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 22.0 10.5123152709 209% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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