.The food travels thousands of miles from farm to consumer. Some people think it would be better to our environment and economy if people only ate local produced food. What extent do the advantages outweigh disadvantages?
The food travels thousands of miles from farm to consumer. On one side it is a very good option and it has some advantages like it encourage employers to the people who are not educated or illiterates. And farmers also able to sell their products with some higher price which allows them for more income. On behalf of the environment, it is good to transport food farm to cities to avoid pollution & chemical free food.
On second-hand transportation of food from farm to consumer leads to increase in expense. Because there are some extra charges seller can take for the delivery.Also it tooks lots of time to cover the distance and in between the freshness and quality of products compromised.People could not get proper nutrition if the item looses its quality.
So if the local individual ate local produced food then it'll helpful & a great distribution towards economy as well.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 120, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'charges'' or 'charge's'?
Suggestion: charges'; charge's
...n expense. Because there are some extra charges seller can take for the delivery.Also i...
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Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Also
...harges seller can take for the delivery.Also it tooks lots of time to cover the dist...
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Also,
...harges seller can take for the delivery.Also it tooks lots of time to cover the dist...
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Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: People
...ess and quality of products compromised.People could not get proper nutrition if the i...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, second, so, then, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 10.5418719212 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 6.10837438424 33% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 8.36945812808 60% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 5.94088669951 34% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 8.0 20.9802955665 38% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 31.9359605911 72% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 5.75862068966 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 737.0 1207.87684729 61% => OK
No of words: 150.0 242.827586207 62% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.91333333333 5.00649968141 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.49963551158 3.92707691288 89% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90267303258 2.71678728327 107% => OK
Unique words: 105.0 139.433497537 75% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.7 0.580463131201 121% => OK
syllable_count: 234.0 379.143842365 62% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 4.6157635468 22% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.65517241379 82% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 12.6551724138 55% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.5024630542 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 57.556006442 50.4703680194 114% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.285714286 104.977214359 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.4285714286 20.9669160288 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.28571428571 7.25397266985 73% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.12807881773 73% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 5.33497536946 75% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 6.9802955665 57% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 2.75862068966 36% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 2.91625615764 69% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.307661051031 0.242375264174 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.146932407061 0.0925447433944 159% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.11666300172 0.071462118173 163% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.184369361191 0.151781067708 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0603515785915 0.0609392437508 99% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 12.6369458128 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 53.1260098522 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.9458128079 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.2 11.5310837438 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.31 8.32886699507 112% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 55.0591133005 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.94827586207 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.3980295567 100% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 55.5555555556 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 50.0 Out of 90
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