Foreign languages should be made compulsory the primary school. How far do you agree with the above statement.

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Foreign languages should be made compulsory the primary school. How far do you agree with the above statement.

Surely there has no time in history where the lives of people have changed more dramatically. A quick reflection on typical day reveals foreign languages should be made compulsory in the primary school has been one of the prominent topic in the contemporary discussion. I completely agree to this argument because foreign language has lead more benefits for masses. I will discuss advantages in upcoming paragraph.
To commence with, language plays an essential role in human life and it is helpful in every field. Firstly, foreign language should made compulsory in primary school because it has increase the communication skill of person in which they can easily understand other country language. Moreover, school should teach foreign language so children easily grab and they can easily made conversation with other country people. For example, French language teach in school eventually pupils can easily speak which they go other country.
In addition to it, learn foreign language is the best habit of person because they have know about foreign language so they can easily handle any difficult problem such as, they can easily made talk with foreign person. Furthermore, foreign language is beneficial for business purpose in which if a person know about foreign language so they can made their business in other country because they have know their language.
In conclusion, foreign language are beneficial for every individual in every field because it make the person more confidence and have a great opportunity to know other country language

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Average: 5.5 (1 vote)
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: The verb 'can' requires the base form of the verb: 'make'
Suggestion: make
...hildren easily grab and they can easily made conversation with other country people...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ab and they can easily made conversation with other country people. For example, ...
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Line 3, column 89, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'known'.
Suggestion: known
... best habit of person because they have know about foreign language so they can easi...
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Line 3, column 190, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'can' requires the base form of the verb: 'make'
Suggestion: make
...ficult problem such as, they can easily made talk with foreign person. Furthermore, ...
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Line 3, column 294, Rule ID: IF_IS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'is'?
Suggestion: is
...eneficial for business purpose in which if a person know about foreign language so...
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Line 3, column 346, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'can' requires the base form of the verb: 'make'
Suggestion: make
...know about foreign language so they can made their business in other country because...
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Line 3, column 401, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'known'.
Suggestion: known
...ness in other country because they have know their language. In conclusion, foreign...
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Line 4, column 95, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'makes'?
Suggestion: makes
...ry individual in every field because it make the person more confidence and have a g...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, furthermore, if, moreover, so, for example, in addition, in conclusion, such as

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 10.5418719212 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 6.10837438424 164% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 8.36945812808 36% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 5.94088669951 67% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 20.9802955665 81% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 31.9359605911 85% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 5.75862068966 122% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1313.0 1207.87684729 109% => OK
No of words: 247.0 242.827586207 102% => OK
Chars per words: 5.31578947368 5.00649968141 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96437052324 3.92707691288 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6266787139 2.71678728327 97% => OK
Unique words: 125.0 139.433497537 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.506072874494 0.580463131201 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 418.5 379.143842365 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.6157635468 65% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.65517241379 82% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6551724138 87% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.5024630542 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.7857043006 50.4703680194 105% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.363636364 104.977214359 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.4545454545 20.9669160288 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.63636363636 7.25397266985 119% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.33497536946 150% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 6.9802955665 158% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 2.75862068966 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 2.91625615764 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.273308683461 0.242375264174 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.122045405799 0.0925447433944 132% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0894308111246 0.071462118173 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.177247927667 0.151781067708 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0668223424767 0.0609392437508 110% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.9 12.6369458128 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 53.1260098522 77% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 10.9458128079 120% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.87 11.5310837438 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.86 8.32886699507 94% => OK
difficult_words: 49.0 55.0591133005 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.94827586207 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.3980295567 104% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 55.5555555556 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 50.0 Out of 90
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