Government promise continue economic growths, but its actually an illusion. Some people think that government should abandon this. Please talk abut the validity and the implications.

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Government promise continue economic growths, but its actually an illusion. Some people think that government should abandon this. Please talk abut the validity and the implications.

The topic of government promises for economic growths has become a heated debate among the authorities. Although many people assert that governments should abandon this because of fake promises, the others refute this proposition saying that it is government legal duty to fulfil people's demands. This essay will discuss why governments made these promises and reach a logical solution.

On the one hand, there are many arguments which found that why governments made fake promises of economic growth in which the most preponderant one is to complete the elected time. Usually when the governments start working they do not have enough money to hold the promises, so failed miserably. For instance, a study showed that most of the goverments in underdeveloped countries made such promises with their people and cannot fulfil these wordings in their tenue. Thus, governments should not made false promises with the people.

On the other hand, there are many soultions that can be provided to overcome these issue. People have true power of votes to elect the true leader who can excel them to the best of economy. People can also take actions against the current government and should protect to get their demands. For example, a recent survey revealed that people of Japan acquired their economy targets just by protesting against the government. Henece, effective soultions can be applied to these problems.

In conclsuion, this essay discussed why governments made promises and solutions against these issues. Therefore, in my opinion, the governments should not made fake promises, if they cannot deal with economy they should not take the government.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 498, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'should' requires the base form of the verb: 'make'
Suggestion: make
...eir tenue. Thus, governments should not made false promises with the people. On ...
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Line 7, column 156, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'should' requires the base form of the verb: 'make'
Suggestion: make
... my opinion, the governments should not made fake promises, if they cannot deal with...
^^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, so, therefore, thus, for example, for instance, in my opinion, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 10.5418719212 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 6.10837438424 196% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 8.36945812808 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 5.94088669951 168% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 20.9802955665 119% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 31.9359605911 94% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 5.75862068966 139% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1400.0 1207.87684729 116% => OK
No of words: 264.0 242.827586207 109% => OK
Chars per words: 5.30303030303 5.00649968141 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03089032464 3.92707691288 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6144157819 2.71678728327 96% => OK
Unique words: 142.0 139.433497537 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.537878787879 0.580463131201 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 429.3 379.143842365 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 4.6157635468 43% => OK
Article: 5.0 1.56157635468 320% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6551724138 111% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.5024630542 88% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.3972442836 50.4703680194 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.0 104.977214359 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.8571428571 20.9669160288 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.42857142857 7.25397266985 89% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.33497536946 37% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 6.9802955665 143% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 2.75862068966 145% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 2.91625615764 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.251767304002 0.242375264174 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0962824781667 0.0925447433944 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0709845878044 0.071462118173 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.174044932273 0.151781067708 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0834727313421 0.0609392437508 137% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 12.6369458128 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 53.1260098522 100% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.9458128079 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.46 11.5310837438 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.54 8.32886699507 103% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 55.0591133005 122% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.94827586207 111% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.3980295567 88% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.5123152709 124% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 80.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 72.0 Out of 90
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