Governments should spend more money on education than on recreation and sports. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
Government need to put aside more money for education compare to recreation and sports. This essay will discuss why government should be more focused on education rather than on recreation and sports.
More money should be given to a education sector of a country because education is the basis for a country's development. Education has brought many new innovation in different sector such technology, medicine and science and if any country fails to provide proper education to its citizen is doom to fail. For example, citizens of many developing and underdeveloped country are suffering majorly because of lack of education. A proper education system will build a platform for the country's development and its citizens's living condition.
On the other hand, recreation and sports are mainly for the entertainment purpose. Being a good nation in sports will certainly come with perks like fame, money and being recognised by the world, but it does not better the living condition of citizens of the country and help the country develop. For example, recently Nepal is doing great in cricket but the living conditon of people of Nepal is very poor. Therefore, it is necessary to spend more money on education to build a nation and its people.
In my opinion, to become a develop nation it is necessary that its citizen is educated which starts with the government spending more money on education sector.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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...its people. In my opinion, to become a develop nation it is necessary that its citizen...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, therefore, for example, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 10.5418719212 123% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 6.10837438424 98% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 8.36945812808 143% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 5.94088669951 34% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 10.0 20.9802955665 48% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 31.9359605911 94% => OK
Nominalization: 23.0 5.75862068966 399% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1185.0 1207.87684729 98% => OK
No of words: 232.0 242.827586207 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.10775862069 5.00649968141 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.90276135726 3.92707691288 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74527685957 2.71678728327 101% => OK
Unique words: 120.0 139.433497537 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.51724137931 0.580463131201 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 378.9 379.143842365 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 4.6157635468 43% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.65517241379 82% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6551724138 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.5024630542 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.7317451196 50.4703680194 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.727272727 104.977214359 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0909090909 20.9669160288 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.90909090909 7.25397266985 81% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.33497536946 75% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 6.9802955665 43% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 2.75862068966 109% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 2.91625615764 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.225443219083 0.242375264174 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.106131585409 0.0925447433944 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0719407599357 0.071462118173 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.1683905772 0.151781067708 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.072949955298 0.0609392437508 120% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 12.6369458128 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 53.1260098522 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.9458128079 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.36 11.5310837438 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.67 8.32886699507 92% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 55.0591133005 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 9.94827586207 126% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.3980295567 100% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.5123152709 124% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 65.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 58.5 Out of 90
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