Many students take part-time jobs while studying in university. Do you think it is a good idea or a bad idea?
The topic of part-time work and university study is always debatable. Some people belive that part-time job and studying in university go hand in hand, while others maintain that it hamper the education process. This essay will discuss why it alright to work while studying in university.
To begin with, there are many students around the world who work part time whilst studying in university because university education is expensive. Cost of education is increasing day by day, which has forced many students to work while studying just to afford their tuition fee. For instances, my tuition fee per semester is 16000 ASD and it is impossible to pay that much every six months with out working as a part-timer. Therefore, part time jobs is a necessity for the student.
Further more, working during studying is great way to gain experience. Student who work in the same field of their study can gain valuable experience, which will make them ready for the real world challenges. For example, student who is studying cookery and work in the restaurant as cook or kitchen hand then he can gain knowledge that will help him he finishes his university.
To capitulate, this essay provide reasons as why working part-time while studying is good idea. In my opinion, student work during their university as long as it does not hamper their studies.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: part-time
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...sible to pay that much every six months with out working as a part-timer. Therefore, par...
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Suggestion: part-time
...out working as a part-timer. Therefore, part time jobs is a necessity for the student. ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
so, then, therefore, while, as for, for example, for instance, in my opinion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 10.5418719212 95% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 6.10837438424 82% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 8.36945812808 60% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 5.94088669951 151% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 20.9802955665 100% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 31.9359605911 75% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 5.75862068966 122% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1129.0 1207.87684729 93% => OK
No of words: 227.0 242.827586207 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.97356828194 5.00649968141 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.88156143495 3.92707691288 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58475084837 2.71678728327 95% => OK
Unique words: 128.0 139.433497537 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.563876651982 0.580463131201 97% => OK
syllable_count: 345.6 379.143842365 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.57093596059 95% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.6157635468 65% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.65517241379 82% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6551724138 95% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.5024630542 88% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.2767142944 50.4703680194 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.0833333333 104.977214359 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.9166666667 20.9669160288 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.58333333333 7.25397266985 105% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.33497536946 56% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 6.9802955665 86% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 2.75862068966 72% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 2.91625615764 137% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.278390194377 0.242375264174 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.123127160867 0.0925447433944 133% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0799483040085 0.071462118173 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.183278132732 0.151781067708 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0571668716568 0.0609392437508 94% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 12.6369458128 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 53.1260098522 116% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.9458128079 83% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.55 11.5310837438 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.66 8.32886699507 92% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 55.0591133005 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.94827586207 90% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.3980295567 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 55.5555555556 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 50.0 Out of 90
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