Many students take part-time jobs while studying in university. Do you think it is a good idea or a bad idea?
The topic of part-time work and university study is always debatable. Some people believe that part-time job and studying in university go hand in hand, while others maintain that it hamper the education process. This essay will discuss why it alright to work while studying in university.
To begin with, there are many students around the world who work part time whilst studying in university because university education is expensive. Cost of education is increasing day by day, which has forced many students to work while studying just to afford their tuition fee. For instances, my tuition fee per semester is 16000 ASD and it is impossible to pay that much every six months with out working as a part-timer. Therefore, part time jobs is a necessity for the student.
On the other hand, university's curriculum is rigours which requires student to concentrate and give their undivided time. There are many cases where students fails because they had no time left to study because of their work. For example, many international student studying in Australia fails university because of their work load. But, without working they cannot pay the extravagant fee of university.
In my opinion, it is good idea to do part-time work during university as long as it does not hamper the studying process of the students.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: part-time
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Suggestion: without
...sible to pay that much every six months with out working as a part-timer. Therefore, par...
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Suggestion: part-time
...out working as a part-timer. Therefore, part time jobs is a necessity for the student. ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, so, therefore, while, as for, for example, for instance, in my opinion, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 10.5418719212 95% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 6.10837438424 33% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 8.36945812808 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 5.94088669951 118% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 20.9802955665 81% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 31.9359605911 88% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 5.75862068966 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1109.0 1207.87684729 92% => OK
No of words: 219.0 242.827586207 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.06392694064 5.00649968141 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.84690116678 3.92707691288 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6774738786 2.71678728327 99% => OK
Unique words: 124.0 139.433497537 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.566210045662 0.580463131201 98% => OK
syllable_count: 349.2 379.143842365 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.6157635468 65% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6551724138 95% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.5024630542 88% => OK
Sentence length SD: 31.6894654771 50.4703680194 63% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.4166666667 104.977214359 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.25 20.9669160288 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.08333333333 7.25397266985 125% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.33497536946 56% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 6.9802955665 72% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 2.75862068966 145% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 2.91625615764 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.312743652253 0.242375264174 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.132120587485 0.0925447433944 143% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0657624062126 0.071462118173 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.210257306598 0.151781067708 139% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0424699386737 0.0609392437508 70% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 12.6369458128 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 53.1260098522 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.9458128079 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.07 11.5310837438 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.56 8.32886699507 91% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 55.0591133005 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.94827586207 90% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.3980295567 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 55.5555555556 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 50.0 Out of 90
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