If u want to study one field in climate change which one u will choose and why
Nowadays, the phenomenon of climate change and its correlated impacts has been hotly debated among academics.
One of the most important fields of climate change that I would pick up for studying would be global warming,
which has devastating effects on our life due to environmental and educational reasons.
First and foremost, it has been argued that the environmental reason is why I think global warming has led to
increasing the earth's temperature significantly contributing to melting icebergs and deforestation. Raise in
temperature can provide the society with some noticeable effects which are rooted in the fact that changing in
weather patterns and deteriorating natural habitats are inextricably bound up. For example, a well-known
American scientist once said, " CO2 and greenhouse emissions should be controlled by mitigation policies run by
the government", which had a significant impact on diminishing global warming crises.
Moreover, another factor that should be considered is the educational reason, which in other words, authorities
should incorporate the global warming courses in school curriculum to raise the awareness of people regarding
this essential topic. Additionally, governments can initiate educational programs for individuals to change
their recycling habits making them environmentally friendly. For instance, some research undertaken in
Melbourne university has asserted that people should be taught to use alternative energies such as green and
solar energy. Thus, the beneficial ramifications of educational development of individuals regarding the
importance of raising the world's temperature can be seen.
To recapitulate, I am inclined to believe that the subject of global warming should not be taken for granted due to
environmental and educational reasons. Governments should make a concerted effort to address this problem.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, moreover, regarding, so, thus, well, for example, for instance, i think, such as, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 10.5418719212 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 6.10837438424 180% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 8.36945812808 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 5.94088669951 168% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 20.9802955665 76% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 31.9359605911 106% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 5.75862068966 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1638.0 1207.87684729 136% => OK
No of words: 275.0 242.827586207 113% => OK
Chars per words: 5.95636363636 5.00649968141 119% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07223819929 3.92707691288 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.31075682342 2.71678728327 122% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 139.433497537 120% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.610909090909 0.580463131201 105% => OK
syllable_count: 505.8 379.143842365 133% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.57093596059 115% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.6157635468 87% => OK
Article: 4.0 1.56157635468 256% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.65517241379 27% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6551724138 87% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 20.5024630542 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 51.6330024514 50.4703680194 102% => OK
Chars per sentence: 148.909090909 104.977214359 142% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.0 20.9669160288 119% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.1818181818 7.25397266985 140% => OK
Paragraphs: 18.0 4.12807881773 436% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 15.0 5.33497536946 281% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 6.9802955665 100% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 2.75862068966 109% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.131875783986 0.242375264174 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0480923536141 0.0925447433944 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0701616886626 0.071462118173 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0369451205425 0.151781067708 24% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0628774410451 0.0609392437508 103% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 19.1 12.6369458128 151% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 29.18 53.1260098522 55% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 6.54236453202 199% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.4 10.9458128079 141% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 17.58 11.5310837438 152% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.22 8.32886699507 123% => OK
difficult_words: 93.0 55.0591133005 169% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 16.0 9.94827586207 161% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.3980295567 115% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 10.5123152709 152% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.