If you want to study a particular area of climate change, which area/subject will you choose?

In the recent decades, Climate change has been the principal problem for human begins. If I want to study a specific part of climate change, then definitely I would like to select the causes of climate change and study of effects these causes. In subsequent paragraphs, I will elucidate that why do I want this specific area of climate change.

To begin with the causes of climate change, there are innumerable reasons for climate change. Primarily, “Greenhouse gases” are the major contributor to climate change. By increasing the level of carbon dioxide gas in atmosphere day by day, increase environment temperature which leads to climate change. For example. In the last few decades, the concentration of CO2 level has increased from 300 parts per millions (ppm) to 410 ppm as a result average temperature of the earth has gone 1.4 degree Celsius.

The effects of small increase temperature caused by climate change can have severe effects. Chiefly, raising in the sea level by melting of polar ice, which will be the reasons for many side effects. This will associate with the more frequent storm; unexpected heavy rainfall leads to flood and other damages; an increase of incidence in wildfires threatens animals, homes, and lives; drought in particular areas; heat waves contributing to human diseases and other consequences.

In a nutshell, to foregoing discussions propounds the view that climate change would give very tough time to human begins in the coming year. Therefore, I want to study these areas to contribute my view to solve the climate change problems.

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Average: 5.2 (3 votes)
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'millions'' or 'million's'?
Suggestion: millions'; million's
... level has increased from 300 parts per millions ppm to 410 ppm as a result average temp...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
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... the earth has gone 1.4 degree Celsius. The effects of small increase temperatur...
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... human diseases and other consequences. In a nutshell, to foregoing discussions ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, so, then, therefore, as to, for example, in particular, as a result, to begin with

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 10.5418719212 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 6.10837438424 98% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 8.36945812808 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 5.94088669951 67% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 12.0 20.9802955665 57% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 31.9359605911 128% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 5.75862068966 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1336.0 1207.87684729 111% => OK
No of words: 258.0 242.827586207 106% => OK
Chars per words: 5.17829457364 5.00649968141 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00778971557 3.92707691288 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80643709663 2.71678728327 103% => OK
Unique words: 147.0 139.433497537 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.56976744186 0.580463131201 98% => OK
syllable_count: 421.2 379.143842365 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.6157635468 65% => OK
Article: 3.0 1.56157635468 192% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 3.65517241379 192% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6551724138 95% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.5024630542 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 61.0014065218 50.4703680194 121% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.333333333 104.977214359 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.5 20.9669160288 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.58333333333 7.25397266985 105% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.33497536946 56% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 6.9802955665 57% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 2.75862068966 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 2.91625615764 137% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.257902176511 0.242375264174 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0948554012342 0.0925447433944 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0838338228956 0.071462118173 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.157174896232 0.151781067708 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0696181987505 0.0609392437508 114% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 12.6369458128 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 53.1260098522 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.9458128079 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.76 11.5310837438 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.96 8.32886699507 108% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 55.0591133005 127% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.94827586207 90% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.3980295567 100% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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