Some people believe that confidence wins bigger games that knowledge alone cannot. Also, that accumulating knowledge makes no sense until one has the confidence to put it to use.Is it true that knowledge will help one win a struggle only if it is put into

In a real world, everyone wants to achieve bigger than that they have. For that, they do hard work and get knowledge about to achieve a particular goal. But also, there is a factor called confidence which is essential to convert this endeavor into the win. In my opinion, if they are applied separately, both confidence and knowledge are as useless.

To begin with, Knowledge is extremely important to do any task because without knowing anything about a task you cannot process. Whereas, confidence provide you positive energy to fight during the struggle. for instance, in the interview, questions are asked is totally irrelevant to your subject to just check the confidence level of the student. In addition to this, while presenting about the new product of a company, the representative should be confidante otherwise customer might not be believed on the product.

On the flip side, if someone have a confidence but do not have knowledge about target than how someone can initialize the process. For example, without having the knowledge, getting a job and keeping pace with the advanced technology is impossible.

To conclude, confidence and knowledge are a critical element in the creation of pathway of success. So, one should maintain a perfect balance between them in order to stand in the long way of life.

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Average: 8.7 (1 vote)
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 130, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Whereas” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...ything about a task you cannot process. Whereas, confidence provide you positive energy...
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Line 3, column 208, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: For
...ve energy to fight during the struggle. for instance, in the interview, questions a...
^^^
Line 5, column 30, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'someone' must be used with a third-person verb: 'has'.
Suggestion: has
...roduct. On the flip side, if someone have a confidence but do not have knowledge ...
^^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, whereas, while, for example, for instance, in addition, in my opinion, to begin with

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 10.5418719212 104% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 6.10837438424 82% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 8.36945812808 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 5.94088669951 50% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 12.0 20.9802955665 57% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 31.9359605911 110% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 5.75862068966 191% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1111.0 1207.87684729 92% => OK
No of words: 219.0 242.827586207 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.07305936073 5.00649968141 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.84690116678 3.92707691288 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76473366083 2.71678728327 102% => OK
Unique words: 136.0 139.433497537 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.62100456621 0.580463131201 107% => OK
syllable_count: 356.4 379.143842365 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 4.6157635468 22% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.71428571429 175% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 3.65517241379 219% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6551724138 95% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.5024630542 88% => OK
Sentence length SD: 28.0545104316 50.4703680194 56% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 92.5833333333 104.977214359 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.25 20.9669160288 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.58333333333 7.25397266985 118% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.33497536946 56% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 6.9802955665 129% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 2.75862068966 36% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 2.91625615764 69% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.210336779791 0.242375264174 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0731414760681 0.0925447433944 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0520448383643 0.071462118173 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.119579874134 0.151781067708 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.045170403631 0.0609392437508 74% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 12.6369458128 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 53.1260098522 100% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.9458128079 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.13 11.5310837438 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.49 8.32886699507 102% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 55.0591133005 100% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.94827586207 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.3980295567 88% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.5123152709 114% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 87.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 79.0 Out of 90
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