If you would travel back in time to meet a famous person from history, what person would you like to meet? Use specific reason and examples to support your choice.
The important of travel back in time, which has always debatable, but now become more controversial. It is my dream to travel back in time and I want go to my childhood time and I want to meet famous history person A.B.J Abdul Kalama. Furthermore, it is a president of India in year 2002 to 2007. It is very great leader in our country. This essay will explore how it can be upcoming the next paragraph before a particular conclusion
To begin with, A.B.J Abdul Kalama is a my favorite history person if I have travel back time in my life so I want really meet that’s great person in Indian political. Abdul Kalama is very fast person in Indian politics. Honorable president A.B.J Abdul Kalama is write a Indian great history and every person miss in the history who are write president Abdul Kalama
To the other hand, My childhood friends meet the president Abdul Kalama in many times but I never meet that’s great person. Abdul Kalama write a Indian history and every person support their history. Abdul Kalama was a many work developed to Indian nation or progressive for India
In conclusion, to sum up, as aforementioned, I think President A.B.J Abdul Kalama is a very great person for Indian nation but earlier time will never come. If I want travel back in time so I really want to meet that’s great person A.B.J Abdul Kalama.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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...nt to meet that's great person A.B.J Abdul Kalama.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, if, really, so, i think, in conclusion, to begin with, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 10.5418719212 95% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 6.10837438424 49% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 8.36945812808 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 5.94088669951 84% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 20.9802955665 110% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 31.9359605911 78% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 5.75862068966 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1116.0 1207.87684729 92% => OK
No of words: 239.0 242.827586207 98% => OK
Chars per words: 4.66945606695 5.00649968141 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.93187294222 3.92707691288 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56736074364 2.71678728327 94% => OK
Unique words: 104.0 139.433497537 75% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.435146443515 0.580463131201 75% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 366.3 379.143842365 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.57093596059 95% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 4.6157635468 130% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6551724138 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.5024630542 112% => OK
Sentence length SD: 87.0579691929 50.4703680194 172% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.6 104.977214359 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.9 20.9669160288 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.2 7.25397266985 113% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 13.0 5.33497536946 244% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 6.9802955665 100% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 2.75862068966 36% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 2.91625615764 69% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.195311587601 0.242375264174 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.101766161382 0.0925447433944 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0703314848193 0.071462118173 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.15284313587 0.151781067708 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0109081598217 0.0609392437508 18% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 12.6369458128 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 53.1260098522 107% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.9458128079 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.1 11.5310837438 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.89 8.32886699507 83% => OK
difficult_words: 32.0 55.0591133005 58% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.94827586207 106% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.3980295567 108% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.5123152709 105% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 55.5555555556 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 50.0 Out of 90
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