Imitating celebrities in sports and movies is good or bad?
Surely there has been no time in history where the lives of people have changed more dramatically. A quick reflection on typical day reveals imitating celebrities in sports and movies man has been one of the most prominent topics in contemporary discussions. People have always been intrigued analyze and explain it can be effect on a common man. Regarding this I will elaborate my viewpoints in given paragraphs.
On the one hand, imitating films and sports personalities are nothing unusual but unfortunately, it is not always good. A large number of our celebrities don’t set good examples. Many of them are known for their extravagant and their life style. They don’t mind spending millions of dollars on shopping. Unfortunately, they inspire middle class people who can hardly afford this. For example, few celebrities who are very famous but they used many drugs. This can be bad effect on a common person and generation.
On the second hand, I will discuss good effect. In our films personalities, we know that celebrities who can do hard-work and get success in their life. They faced many problems and they can struggle with them. For example, we all know about the famous celebrity salman khan who faced many problems and many bad situations but he got success in his life. He became from zero to hero. Moreover, we can learnt from of it that we can do hard work in our life and get success.
In a nut shell, I would like to say that I am agreed for both views. Imitating celebrities in sports and movies is good for that we can hard work or bad for that we can’t copy them.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: Many; Numerous
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Message: Use simply 'celebrity'.
Suggestion: celebrity
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Message: The verb 'can' requires the base form of the verb: 'learn'
Suggestion: learn
...ame from zero to hero. Moreover, we can learnt from of it that we can do hard work in ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, moreover, regarding, second, so, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 10.5418719212 95% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 6.10837438424 196% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 8.36945812808 167% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 5.94088669951 168% => OK
Pronoun: 39.0 20.9802955665 186% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 30.0 31.9359605911 94% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 5.75862068966 35% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1326.0 1207.87684729 110% => OK
No of words: 279.0 242.827586207 115% => OK
Chars per words: 4.75268817204 5.00649968141 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08696624509 3.92707691288 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73156847294 2.71678728327 101% => OK
Unique words: 151.0 139.433497537 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.541218637993 0.580463131201 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 412.2 379.143842365 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.57093596059 95% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 4.6157635468 238% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.65517241379 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 12.6551724138 150% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.5024630542 68% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 32.4418081205 50.4703680194 64% => OK
Chars per sentence: 69.7894736842 104.977214359 66% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.6842105263 20.9669160288 70% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.78947368421 7.25397266985 38% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.33497536946 56% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 6.9802955665 158% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 2.75862068966 109% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 2.91625615764 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.261287166313 0.242375264174 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0752228004654 0.0925447433944 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.108145243937 0.071462118173 151% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.177212601035 0.151781067708 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0812235534858 0.0609392437508 133% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.3 12.6369458128 66% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 65.73 53.1260098522 124% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 10.9458128079 69% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.68 11.5310837438 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.56 8.32886699507 91% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 55.0591133005 104% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.94827586207 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.3980295567 73% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.5123152709 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 55.5 Out of 90
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