The importance of cars and airplane in modern life. Give example.

The importance of cars and airplane in modern life, which was always debatable, has now become more controversial. The substantial influence of those mechanism of transportation has sparked the controversy over the potential impact of this trend on the development of modern society in recent years. It can be agreed that vehicles have some positive impacts, but some people claim that aircrafts have some positive impacts as well. This essay will elaborate the relevance of automobiles and airplanes in contemporary life and thus will lead to a logical conclusion.

At the outset, there are numerous reasons why cars are substantial, but the most conspicuous one stems from the fact that travelling in cars give drivers privacy during their personal or working trips as they are a best way to reach destination. For instance, people living in cities can commute to workplace easily and comfortably in their cars, reaching destinations on time. Cars, therefore, can play a vital role for modern commuters.

Nevertheless, some people adopt an opposing view and tend to believe that airplanes are also significant for contemporary societies as there are innumerable reasons for that, but the most pre-dominant one lies in the fact that aircrafts help people reach the place of destinations, in short time, that are impossible to get due to their longs distances. As an illustration, employees working in corporate offices can travel to other branches within short period of notice to attend business meetings. Aeroplanes, hence, can play a vital role to save time suring emercency situations.

From what has been discussed above, it can be concluded that the impact of cars and airplane in modern life is prominent.

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Average: 8.5 (1 vote)
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 145, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this mechanism' or 'those mechanisms'?
Suggestion: this mechanism; those mechanisms
...roversial. The substantial influence of those mechanism of transportation has sparked the contr...
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Line 3, column 214, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[1]
Message: Use 'the' with the superlative.
Suggestion: the
...r personal or working trips as they are a best way to reach destination. For inst...
^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, if, nevertheless, so, therefore, thus, well, for instance, in short

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 10.5418719212 104% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 6.10837438424 131% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 8.36945812808 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 5.94088669951 151% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 20.9802955665 81% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 31.9359605911 116% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 5.75862068966 139% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1448.0 1207.87684729 120% => OK
No of words: 275.0 242.827586207 113% => OK
Chars per words: 5.26545454545 5.00649968141 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07223819929 3.92707691288 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.95755986086 2.71678728327 109% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 139.433497537 117% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.592727272727 0.580463131201 102% => OK
syllable_count: 455.4 379.143842365 120% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.6157635468 87% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.931034482759 322% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 3.65517241379 82% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6551724138 87% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 20.5024630542 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 78.0738154643 50.4703680194 155% => OK
Chars per sentence: 131.636363636 104.977214359 125% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.0 20.9669160288 119% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.72727272727 7.25397266985 107% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.33497536946 37% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 6.9802955665 129% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 2.75862068966 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 2.91625615764 69% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.232669218178 0.242375264174 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0908073289828 0.0925447433944 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.114676132326 0.071462118173 160% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.152837206312 0.151781067708 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0931041093553 0.0609392437508 153% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.9 12.6369458128 126% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.64 53.1260098522 71% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 10.9458128079 130% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.58 11.5310837438 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.36 8.32886699507 112% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 55.0591133005 142% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.94827586207 116% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.3980295567 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.5123152709 114% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 85.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 76.5 Out of 90
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