The effect of changing human habits through laws, which was always debatable, has now become more controversial. The substantial influence of lawful penalties has sparked the controversial over the potential impact of this trend on human behaviour in recent years. It can be agreed that implementing laws has some positive impacts, but some people claim that it has some negative impacts as well. This essay will elaborate how law can change people conduct and when this is not possible and thus will lead to a logical conclusion.
At the outset, there are numerous reasons why strict laws should be used in order to change human habits, but the most conspicuous one stems from the fact that laws develop a sense of social responsibility through punishment, forcing people to act within the law. For instance, traffic rules act as a control of massive traffic and penalize people who disobey them, making changes in future people's actions while driving. Implementing regulations and punishments, therefore, can play a vital role for changing human habits.
Nevertheless, there remain some drawbacks, which can certainly overwhelm the potential influence of human conduct and habits cannot be judged by any law. As an illustration, despite legal consequences some thieves continue stealing or breaking the law. Laws, hence, are unlikely to change human behaviour.
From what has been discussed above, it can be concluded that the impact of law on human habits is prominent, although it has some drawbacks that should be well handled.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, hence, nevertheless, so, therefore, thus, well, while, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 10.5418719212 104% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 6.10837438424 164% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 8.36945812808 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 5.94088669951 151% => OK
Pronoun: 13.0 20.9802955665 62% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 31.9359605911 81% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 5.75862068966 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1298.0 1207.87684729 107% => OK
No of words: 246.0 242.827586207 101% => OK
Chars per words: 5.27642276423 5.00649968141 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96035189615 3.92707691288 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77631265479 2.71678728327 102% => OK
Unique words: 151.0 139.433497537 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.613821138211 0.580463131201 106% => OK
syllable_count: 391.5 379.143842365 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.6157635468 65% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.931034482759 215% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 3.65517241379 82% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6551724138 87% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.5024630542 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.8070405741 50.4703680194 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.0 104.977214359 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.3636363636 20.9669160288 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.54545454545 7.25397266985 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.33497536946 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 6.9802955665 43% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 2.75862068966 145% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 2.91625615764 137% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.313249153567 0.242375264174 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.124980524743 0.0925447433944 135% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0442779760757 0.071462118173 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.195762752442 0.151781067708 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0395143902723 0.0609392437508 65% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.6 12.6369458128 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 53.1260098522 93% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.9458128079 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.64 11.5310837438 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.73 8.32886699507 117% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 55.0591133005 142% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.94827586207 111% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.3980295567 104% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.5123152709 105% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 80.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 72.0 Out of 90
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