The importance of traveling for education is greatly overrated. In modern days, you can still be a brilliant scholar without going outdoors. To what extent do you agree?
The main reason of migrating for education purposes is widely popular these days. Nowadays most intelligent student can be scholar in own country. Although it has many advantages and this advantages that involve.
First, of all in terms of schooling is not always you need to go to other places in order to gain some knowledge or more educated person. However, some people believe that education outside the premises is more beneficial to their children. Especially if a parent that belong to well known families they prefer to study abroad. All the teachers abroad is sophisticated and clever in terms of teaching towards their offspring.
But in recent studies shows that there is no need to travel in other part of the word to study in order to be a smart. All country are more on technology and same teaching method they can prepare a lesson to their students. Like for example in Nursing students in the Philippines most of the books that they are using is same with American nursing school as well the authors of the books. These days you can use an internet to search what kind of research you need in just a few seconds you can access all the related article that you wanted. Most important is that if you are have a determination in your life to gain knowledge in your out country.
Therefore, I conclude that their is no need to migrate to other city in terms of education purposes. Because it is costly and you need to adjust new environment.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, second, so, therefore, well, for example, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 10.5418719212 133% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 6.10837438424 147% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 8.36945812808 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 5.94088669951 135% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 20.9802955665 143% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 42.0 31.9359605911 132% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 5.75862068966 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1199.0 1207.87684729 99% => OK
No of words: 258.0 242.827586207 106% => OK
Chars per words: 4.64728682171 5.00649968141 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00778971557 3.92707691288 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54306398831 2.71678728327 94% => OK
Unique words: 143.0 139.433497537 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.554263565891 0.580463131201 95% => OK
syllable_count: 378.9 379.143842365 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.57093596059 95% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 4.6157635468 43% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.65517241379 55% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6551724138 111% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.5024630542 88% => OK
Sentence length SD: 30.8369643017 50.4703680194 61% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.6428571429 104.977214359 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.4285714286 20.9669160288 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.28571428571 7.25397266985 73% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.33497536946 56% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 6.9802955665 143% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 2.75862068966 72% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 2.91625615764 69% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.222548947785 0.242375264174 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0656218077058 0.0925447433944 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.061724466179 0.071462118173 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.121472487469 0.151781067708 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0538583834285 0.0609392437508 88% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.7 12.6369458128 77% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 53.1260098522 116% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.9458128079 83% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.69 11.5310837438 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.2 8.32886699507 98% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 55.0591133005 109% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.94827586207 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.3980295567 88% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.5123152709 95% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 72.2222222222 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 65.0 Out of 90
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