With increasing public demands and medical proofs which state that Cannabis is safe and has multiple applications in the field of medicine, there has a huge outcry towards its legalisation in the government. What are your thoughts on the legalization of Cannabis?
There have been many experiments has been carried out on cannabis these days. Recently, cannabis is proved by the doctors that it has a wide range of medical applications. A huge debate is carried out for whether the cannabis should be made legal or not between government and public. this essay will discuss what could be the negative consequences occurs due to the legalization of this drug.
The legalization of cannabis can be a devastating outcome for the people who get addicted to this drug. There are high chances of getting addicted to this drug. when taken frequently. According to the experiment carried out, an excess of cannabis intake can lead to slow down the metabolism of the body. For instance, if a person takes as medicine, it is likely to get addiction after the medication is over. Therefore, intake of cannabis can be proven to be addictive.
Misuse of the cannabis might increase due to the legalization of this drug in the country. There are a number of people who are seeking cannabis just for the sake of getting high and having fun. The Fake prescription from the doctor to buy cannabis is likely to be used. For example, there are number of doctors which are ready to prescribe this medicine for the sake of few bucks. Therefore, legalizing cannabis can have an adverse effect on the misuse of this drug.
In conclusion, getting legalization of cannabis can have negative effects by getting addicted and misutilization of it. Despite the advantages of the cannabis, I believe the demerits of legalization outweigh the merits.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, therefore, for example, for instance, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 10.5418719212 171% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 6.10837438424 147% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 8.36945812808 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 5.94088669951 84% => OK
Pronoun: 13.0 20.9802955665 62% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 31.9359605911 138% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 5.75862068966 208% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1302.0 1207.87684729 108% => OK
No of words: 264.0 242.827586207 109% => OK
Chars per words: 4.93181818182 5.00649968141 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03089032464 3.92707691288 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81911844976 2.71678728327 104% => OK
Unique words: 132.0 139.433497537 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.5 0.580463131201 86% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 428.4 379.143842365 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.6157635468 65% => OK
Article: 4.0 1.56157635468 256% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.65517241379 82% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 12.6551724138 134% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.5024630542 73% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 24.9841472229 50.4703680194 50% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 76.5882352941 104.977214359 73% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.5294117647 20.9669160288 74% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.47058823529 7.25397266985 48% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.33497536946 56% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 6.9802955665 86% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 2.75862068966 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 2.91625615764 206% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.142356630015 0.242375264174 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0520733301669 0.0925447433944 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0346844662142 0.071462118173 49% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0978528817755 0.151781067708 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0228558193523 0.0609392437508 38% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.6 12.6369458128 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 53.1260098522 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.9458128079 83% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.02 11.5310837438 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.91 8.32886699507 95% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 55.0591133005 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.94827586207 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.3980295567 77% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.5123152709 95% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 64.4444444444 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 58.0 Out of 90
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