Do you think consumer should avoid over packed products or it is
responsibility of producer to avoid extra packaging of products?" Give
your views or any relevant example with your own experience.
Over packaging of products has become a trend in today's competitive world.
Producers are trying to attract consumers with attractive packaging of their products,
not bothered about its negative impact not only on our environment but the users as
well. It should be the responsibility of the producers to limit the wastage of the
resources in the form of un-necessary packaging.
The cost of over packaging is actually added to the product sold. In fact, at
times it is seen the packing cost and durability is more that the product itself. The type
of packaging found in pharmaceutical industries can be taken as an example here. Pills
and tablets are found to be packed in much bigger and colorful strips than needed.
Does this increase the sale of medicine? No. Such packaging is of no concern to the
consumers. But, the cost of medicine would have definitely been lesser if sold in a
simple outlook.
Further, the material used is mostly non-disposable which adds to the
environmental pollution to a great extent. Snacks and other food items packaged in
eye-catchy shimmering colored packets are consumed in a large scale by everybody.
These packets are really difficult to dispose as they emit poisonous gas if burnt and if
not can be seen to contaminate water somewhere. Producers should realize the
importance of using materials like paper and stick to simple packaging.
To conclude, I believe it is the responsibility of the consumers to refuse
products that are over packed as ultimately they are on the losing side.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, but, if, look, really, so, well, in fact, to a great extent
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 10.5418719212 161% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 6.10837438424 82% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 8.36945812808 84% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 5.94088669951 50% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 20.9802955665 67% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 31.9359605911 132% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 5.75862068966 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1307.0 1207.87684729 108% => OK
No of words: 257.0 242.827586207 106% => OK
Chars per words: 5.08560311284 5.00649968141 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00390054096 3.92707691288 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.91430077818 2.71678728327 107% => OK
Unique words: 154.0 139.433497537 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.599221789883 0.580463131201 103% => OK
syllable_count: 414.9 379.143842365 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.6157635468 65% => OK
Article: 4.0 1.56157635468 256% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.65517241379 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 12.6551724138 119% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.5024630542 83% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 35.642047578 50.4703680194 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.1333333333 104.977214359 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.1333333333 20.9669160288 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.6 7.25397266985 63% => OK
Paragraphs: 19.0 4.12807881773 460% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 5.33497536946 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 6.9802955665 86% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 2.75862068966 109% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 2.91625615764 206% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.205984880933 0.242375264174 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0645546328563 0.0925447433944 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0569553613994 0.071462118173 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0567031615076 0.151781067708 37% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0563630257241 0.0609392437508 92% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 12.6369458128 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 53.1260098522 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.9458128079 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.95 11.5310837438 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.78 8.32886699507 105% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 55.0591133005 127% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.94827586207 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.3980295567 85% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 64.4444444444 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 58.0 Out of 90
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