The claim that animals have “rights” has been the subject of much debate since the 1970s. Are zoos helping or hurting our animals? Should zoos be banned? Do you agree or disagree?
There is ongoing debate on the animal rights from 1970s. People claim that the zoos are not helping them but they are hurting in some or other way. However, I believe that the zoos are vital for the preservation of the animals and they must not be banned. My preferences are argued further in this essay.
To begin with, zoos are meant to protect the animals by creating the suitable habitat for them. Several animals are protected which are on the verge of extinction by keeping them into the zoo. Animals get the familiar environment and the food which is suitable for them. If the animals were in the forest, they would have to hunt for the daily meal. For example, the lions in the Gir forest are getting less day by day. Zoos provide the best facilities to lion which they need.
Furthermore, Zoos are the better place to see the animals. It brings awareness to the people about the animals and birds. Person who is interested in the wildlife discoveries then zoos are the best place to go and learn about them.
In conclusion, though the animals are caged in the zoos, I think it benefits to animals and as well as society. I believe that the zoos should be promoted rather than getting banned.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, however, if, so, then, well, for example, i think, in conclusion, as well as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 10.5418719212 161% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 6.10837438424 65% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 8.36945812808 84% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 5.94088669951 118% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 20.9802955665 91% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 31.9359605911 85% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 5.75862068966 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 989.0 1207.87684729 82% => OK
No of words: 217.0 242.827586207 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.55760368664 5.00649968141 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.8380880478 3.92707691288 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.28010497982 2.71678728327 84% => OK
Unique words: 118.0 139.433497537 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.543778801843 0.580463131201 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 307.8 379.143842365 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.57093596059 89% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 4.6157635468 130% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.65517241379 55% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 12.6551724138 119% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.5024630542 68% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 20.4348286565 50.4703680194 40% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 65.9333333333 104.977214359 63% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.4666666667 20.9669160288 69% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.26666666667 7.25397266985 100% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.33497536946 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 6.9802955665 100% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 2.75862068966 109% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 2.91625615764 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.283812620999 0.242375264174 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.101456192146 0.0925447433944 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0614869823926 0.071462118173 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.181027035769 0.151781067708 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0628113048951 0.0609392437508 103% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.3 12.6369458128 58% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 74.19 53.1260098522 140% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 10.9458128079 58% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 8.58 11.5310837438 74% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.1 8.32886699507 85% => OK
difficult_words: 38.0 55.0591133005 69% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.94827586207 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.3980295567 73% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 10.5123152709 67% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 55.5555555556 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 50.0 Out of 90
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