Information revolution has changed the ways of mass communication and had some negative and positive effects on individuals' lives as well as on society. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Now in modern era, mass communication is important for every country because it helps to communicate with others people. But they have some effects like positive and negative which is not good for society as well as bad for people. Many people are agree with this statement but some are disagree with this. I will shed some light on both views in the upcoming paragraphs before reaching at proper conclusion.
On the one hand, the mass communication has some negative effect in society as well as in people. Like when the person is in difficult situation they want help of another person. Few decades ago they burn the woods and smoke is produce and another person help them to save their life. But it effects on our environment which harmful for people also.
On the other hand, the mass communication has some positive effect. Nowadays, the way of mass communication has changed many things are come day by day like Internet, Radio, T.V and Newspaper is the best way to communicate with other world. For example one can easily find anything regarding to the outer world with the help of newspaper.
All in all, the every coin has two sides; this essay is also containing two sides. But I think positive effects are more as compare to negative and modern mass communication is better as compare to older communication because of technology increases rapidly.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'disagreed'.
Suggestion: disagreed
... agree with this statement but some are disagree with this. I will shed some light on bo...
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Message: 'Also' is not used at the end of the sentence. Use 'as well' instead.
Suggestion: as well
...ur environment which harmful for people also. On the other hand, the mass commun...
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Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: V
...come day by day like Internet, Radio, T.V and Newspaper is the best way to commun...
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...he every coin has two sides; this essay is also containing two sides. But I think positive effects...
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Message: Comparison requires 'than', not 'then' nor 'as'.
Suggestion: than
.... But I think positive effects are more as compare to negative and modern mass com...
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Message: Comparison requires 'than', not 'then' nor 'as'.
Suggestion: than
...and modern mass communication is better as compare to older communication because ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, regarding, so, well, for example, i think, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 10.5418719212 104% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 6.10837438424 33% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 8.36945812808 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 5.94088669951 50% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 13.0 20.9802955665 62% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 31.9359605911 100% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 5.75862068966 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1137.0 1207.87684729 94% => OK
No of words: 234.0 242.827586207 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.85897435897 5.00649968141 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.91114542567 3.92707691288 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60141301927 2.71678728327 96% => OK
Unique words: 127.0 139.433497537 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.542735042735 0.580463131201 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 369.0 379.143842365 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 4.6157635468 43% => OK
Article: 4.0 1.56157635468 256% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 0.931034482759 322% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 3.65517241379 82% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6551724138 103% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.5024630542 88% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.9559408228 50.4703680194 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.4615384615 104.977214359 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0 20.9669160288 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.69230769231 7.25397266985 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.33497536946 112% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 6.9802955665 129% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 2.75862068966 72% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 2.91625615764 69% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.244240154255 0.242375264174 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.096036502123 0.0925447433944 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0930637407341 0.071462118173 130% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.148115352224 0.151781067708 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0342817745737 0.0609392437508 56% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.5 12.6369458128 83% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 53.1260098522 100% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.9458128079 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.61 11.5310837438 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.57 8.32886699507 91% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 55.0591133005 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.94827586207 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.3980295567 88% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.5123152709 105% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 62.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 56.5 Out of 90
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.