It is often said that “when in Rome, do as the Romans do”. Do you think people should adapt and accept the culture of the country they are visiting? Do you think it is possible to learn a culture without learning the language?
It is frequently believed that when a person would visit Rome, they should also mimic the way Romans do. I partially agree that tourist people should learn the culture of the foreign land they will visit due to the fact that they would only stay there for a short period of time, also it is impossible to learn a language without learning the culture because it is fundamental part of itself.
To begin with, cultural adaptation takes time. If a person will be visiting a particular place, one cannot easily learn their culture. It is a vast characteristic of the society that is learnt through experience and interaction to the locals. The acceptance of culture is not that difficult as it may seem to be the natural behavior and as a sign of respect. For example, while visiting India with rich religious traditions will be supported by the tourist in their quest for prayers and temple rituals.
Moreover, it not feasible to know one's culture when not firstly learning their language. This is due to the fact that the vital element of culture is language and everything else follows such as beliefs and philosophy. A person cannot be able to understand another country's way of life if he cannot interact with the natives and will be left alien to a foreign territory. To illustrate this, in a recent study conducted by Oxford University that 32% of foreign visitors tend to get lost and went home earlier than expected because of language barrier.
In conclusion, a traveler should make it a point to open their minds in embracing other country's heritage and tradition. Although they cannot quickly adapt it overnight, they should still study their language to have at least a glimpse of their entire culture and therefore can happily enjoy the land.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 265, Rule ID: PERIOD_OF_TIME
Message: Use simply 'period'.
... they would only stay there for a short period of time, also it is impossible to learn a langu...
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, if, may, moreover, so, still, therefore, while, at least, for example, in conclusion, such as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 10.5418719212 123% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 6.10837438424 262% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 9.0 8.36945812808 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 5.94088669951 151% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 20.9802955665 148% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 36.0 31.9359605911 113% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 5.75862068966 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1461.0 1207.87684729 121% => OK
No of words: 302.0 242.827586207 124% => OK
Chars per words: 4.83774834437 5.00649968141 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1687104957 3.92707691288 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58797448729 2.71678728327 95% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 139.433497537 119% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.549668874172 0.580463131201 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 456.3 379.143842365 120% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.57093596059 95% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 4.6157635468 152% => OK
Article: 3.0 1.56157635468 192% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.71428571429 175% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6551724138 103% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.5024630542 112% => OK
Sentence length SD: 57.0106395136 50.4703680194 113% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.384615385 104.977214359 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.2307692308 20.9669160288 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.0 7.25397266985 138% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.33497536946 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 6.9802955665 72% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 2.75862068966 72% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 2.91625615764 206% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.255853765702 0.242375264174 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0840940259657 0.0925447433944 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0752420114903 0.071462118173 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.152611535902 0.151781067708 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.100125628374 0.0609392437508 164% => OK
automated_readability_index: 13.0 12.6369458128 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 53.1260098522 107% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.9458128079 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.09 11.5310837438 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.44 8.32886699507 101% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 55.0591133005 127% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.94827586207 111% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.3980295567 108% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.5123152709 105% => OK
What are above readability scores?
Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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