More and more students are studying at universities abroad, either because it is cheaper, or because they feel they can receive a better education, or because it will provide them with greater professional opportunities. Which one do you think is the most important reason?
Choose which position you most agree with and discuss why you chose that position. Support your point of view with details from your own experiences, observations or reading
Several pupils are enrolling in colleges outside their own countries either because it is more economical, or due to improved education, or also because of better career opportunities that can be offered to them. In my point of view, the foremost reason is the latter due to numerous of large companies to choose from and it can provide them broader perspective.
To begin with, the chances of getting hired after individuals studied overseas are higher. Multitude of employers is located in megacities. For this reason, plenty of opportunities to apply for work would be laid upon them once they graduated. Learning facilities in some popular cities like in US have been recognized to have lesser unemployment rate compared to under developed nations.
Moreover, one's career opportunity can be thoroughly augmented through established international companies which can be found abroad. Countless corporations can be explored upon to broaden his/her skills. There will be no limit to enhance knowledge, capabilities as well as personality due to open encounter and experience with the country's finest academies.To illustrate, Indian national has able to learn the english language because of his two years stay in Australia.
In conclusion, one of the benefits of pursuing studies overseas can be chiefly achieved by the better work opportunities. It is indeed the consequence of hardwork and perseverance of the person regardless of staying away from his/her home country just to continue schooling abroad.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, moreover, so, well, in conclusion, as well as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 10.5418719212 133% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 6.10837438424 131% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 8.36945812808 60% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 5.94088669951 34% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 20.9802955665 81% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 31.9359605911 141% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 5.75862068966 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1282.0 1207.87684729 106% => OK
No of words: 235.0 242.827586207 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.45531914894 5.00649968141 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.91531732006 3.92707691288 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.05732169305 2.71678728327 113% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 139.433497537 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.68085106383 0.580463131201 117% => OK
syllable_count: 407.7 379.143842365 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 4.6157635468 22% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.931034482759 215% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6551724138 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.5024630542 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 59.5520468245 50.4703680194 118% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.545454545 104.977214359 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.3636363636 20.9669160288 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.0 7.25397266985 83% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.33497536946 75% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 6.9802955665 86% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 2.75862068966 36% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 2.91625615764 137% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.220284804991 0.242375264174 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0693130056011 0.0925447433944 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0678232279227 0.071462118173 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.121596980219 0.151781067708 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0615486827257 0.0609392437508 101% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.0 12.6369458128 119% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 53.1260098522 78% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 10.9458128079 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.39 11.5310837438 125% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.12 8.32886699507 122% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 55.0591133005 147% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.94827586207 116% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.3980295567 100% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.5123152709 143% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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