In today's era, TV has become very important part of life as a medium to spread intelligence and social awareness. Do you think it could have other side as well?
In this modern era, there is an ongoing eleberation aamong people on the importance of watching tv. While some people claim that social awareness is more important compared with watching tv, no my point of view I think that social awareness is more important compared with TV. In this essay, I shall discuss factors stregthering my arguament while analysing both advantages and disadvantages of watching tv.
First anf foremost, the tv gives more valuble programs to watch. Fore instance, documentry of travell vlogs or lifestyle programs. also, can watch news that gives instantly over the world with live feed of videos.
On the other hand, some people see that importance of the social awareness. For example, some people watching tv all day long untill braod cast stops. In that senario, they should have to filter them self what to watch and what should not. How ever some occations like at evening people stop all work to watch dramas that filled with rubish familly issues.
In conclusion, wathing tv is not bad habit but people should have control of using it. In nutshell, it is belived to consider that watching tv has become very important in human life.
Comments
Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 224, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ing tv, no my point of view I think that social awareness is more important compa...
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Line 3, column 132, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Also
...of travell vlogs or lifestyle programs. also, can watch news that gives instantly ov...
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Line 5, column 241, Rule ID: HOW_EVER[1]
Message: Did you mean 'however'?
Suggestion: However
...self what to watch and what should not. How ever some occations like at evening people s...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, so, while, for example, i think, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 10.5418719212 47% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 6.10837438424 82% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 8.36945812808 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 5.94088669951 118% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 20.9802955665 81% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 31.9359605911 85% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 5.75862068966 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 978.0 1207.87684729 81% => OK
No of words: 197.0 242.827586207 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.96446700508 5.00649968141 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.74642080493 3.92707691288 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.4651556645 2.71678728327 91% => OK
Unique words: 125.0 139.433497537 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.634517766497 0.580463131201 109% => OK
syllable_count: 290.7 379.143842365 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.57093596059 95% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.6157635468 65% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 3.65517241379 164% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6551724138 95% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.5024630542 78% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 30.8166621597 50.4703680194 61% => OK
Chars per sentence: 81.5 104.977214359 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.4166666667 20.9669160288 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.25 7.25397266985 100% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.33497536946 56% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 6.9802955665 86% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 2.75862068966 72% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 2.91625615764 137% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.182886355006 0.242375264174 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0711710021255 0.0925447433944 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.072316611603 0.071462118173 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.115481177038 0.151781067708 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0732729797767 0.0609392437508 120% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.1 12.6369458128 80% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 53.1260098522 120% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 10.9458128079 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.19 11.5310837438 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.44 8.32886699507 101% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 55.0591133005 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.94827586207 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.3980295567 81% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 200 words wanted.
Rates: 55.5555555556 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 50.0 Out of 90
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 224, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ing tv, no my point of view I think that social awareness is more important compa...
^^
Line 3, column 132, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Also
...of travell vlogs or lifestyle programs. also, can watch news that gives instantly ov...
^^^^
Line 5, column 241, Rule ID: HOW_EVER[1]
Message: Did you mean 'however'?
Suggestion: However
...self what to watch and what should not. How ever some occations like at evening people s...
^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, so, while, for example, i think, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 10.5418719212 47% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 6.10837438424 82% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 8.36945812808 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 5.94088669951 118% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 20.9802955665 81% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 31.9359605911 85% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 5.75862068966 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 978.0 1207.87684729 81% => OK
No of words: 197.0 242.827586207 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.96446700508 5.00649968141 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.74642080493 3.92707691288 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.4651556645 2.71678728327 91% => OK
Unique words: 125.0 139.433497537 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.634517766497 0.580463131201 109% => OK
syllable_count: 290.7 379.143842365 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.57093596059 95% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.6157635468 65% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 3.65517241379 164% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6551724138 95% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.5024630542 78% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 30.8166621597 50.4703680194 61% => OK
Chars per sentence: 81.5 104.977214359 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.4166666667 20.9669160288 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.25 7.25397266985 100% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.33497536946 56% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 6.9802955665 86% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 2.75862068966 72% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 2.91625615764 137% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.182886355006 0.242375264174 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0711710021255 0.0925447433944 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.072316611603 0.071462118173 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.115481177038 0.151781067708 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0732729797767 0.0609392437508 120% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.1 12.6369458128 80% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 53.1260098522 120% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 10.9458128079 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.19 11.5310837438 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.44 8.32886699507 101% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 55.0591133005 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.94827586207 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.3980295567 81% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 200 words wanted.
Rates: 55.5555555556 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 50.0 Out of 90
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.