In today's era, TV has become very important part of life as a medium to spread intelligence and social awareness. Do you think it could have other side as well?
In modern era, there is an ongoing deliberation among people on the use of television. While some people argure it provides intelligence and social awareness, however on my point of view television can give adverse impacts on the society. In this essy, I shall discuss on my view while analyzing both the favourable and unfavourable situations.
First and foremost, we can experience myraid of disadvatages in watching television. Television can destroy a persons valuable time which he could use in some other activity which could improve their knowledge or life quality. For instance, if a child is addicted in watching cartoons he will not have time for his studies which will effect his future life badly. Therefore parent's bear the responsibity on the time they allocate in watching TV, and they have to monitor the programmes they watch as well.
On the other hand, TV can be used to telecast educational programmes for children and they can telecast reliable news to make social awareness. Besides that , media stations can telecast good entertainment programmes to stimulate peoples' brains. For example, quality musical programme can be a good relaxation method for a person who were busy with documentary work during the day time.
In conclusion, it is recommended to use television by knowing the impacts, in other words people have to choose the programmes according to their taste. It is beleived that governments bear the responsibility of monitoring these media institutions because television can effect the society in a sensitive manner.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a person' or simply 'persons'?
Suggestion: a person; persons
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Message: Did you mean 'affect'?
Suggestion: affect
...ot have time for his studies which will effect his future life badly. Therefore parent...
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Therefore,
...hich will effect his future life badly. Therefore parents bear the responsibity on the ti...
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Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...s to make social awareness. Besides that , media stations can telecast good entert...
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Message: Consider replacing "in a sensitive manner" with adverb for "sensitive"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...cause television can effect the society in a sensitive manner.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, first, however, if, so, therefore, well, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, in other words, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 10.5418719212 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 6.10837438424 213% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 6.0 8.36945812808 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 5.94088669951 101% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 20.9802955665 100% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 31.9359605911 97% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 5.75862068966 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1313.0 1207.87684729 109% => OK
No of words: 249.0 242.827586207 103% => OK
Chars per words: 5.27309236948 5.00649968141 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.97237131171 3.92707691288 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.96957640077 2.71678728327 109% => OK
Unique words: 150.0 139.433497537 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.602409638554 0.580463131201 104% => OK
syllable_count: 426.6 379.143842365 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.6157635468 87% => OK
Article: 0.0 1.56157635468 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 3.65517241379 164% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6551724138 95% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.5024630542 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 25.485698604 50.4703680194 50% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 109.416666667 104.977214359 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.75 20.9669160288 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.0 7.25397266985 152% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.33497536946 94% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 6.9802955665 100% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 2.75862068966 36% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 2.91625615764 137% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.116610936332 0.242375264174 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0408249119485 0.0925447433944 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0385884652437 0.071462118173 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0648399801062 0.151781067708 43% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0239610564354 0.0609392437508 39% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 12.6369458128 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 53.1260098522 80% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.54236453202 171% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 10.9458128079 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.29 11.5310837438 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.32 8.32886699507 112% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 55.0591133005 134% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.94827586207 106% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.3980295567 96% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.5123152709 105% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.