The world is becoming a smaller place because of globalization. Some people dread that culture will inevitably disappear as a result. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
In modern era, there is an ongoing deliberation among people on whether culture will be dissapered within globalization. While, some people argue that globalization will adversely affect on culural identity, but on my point of view I do not agree with that view. In this essay, I shall discuss on my point of view analyzing both the views.
First and foremost, culture is a thing that is inherent from their ancestors, therefore culture is included in their genes which cannot be seperated from any kind of thing.For instance, every country have their a set of population who are called as tribes which saves the culture. Other than that, people can use media to promote their culture to another countries in order to increase their income on cultural tourism.
On the other hand, there is a tendency that younger generation in eastern culture absorbing western culture in a rapid way. For example, people all over the world enjoy western dancing and music, sometimes more than their cultural dances and classical music. Therefore, we can see a considerable threat to their own culture in the long run.
In conclusion, it is recommended to teach cultural dancing, music and history to the younger generation to feel their own culture from their childhood. Consequentely, this move will help new generation to come up with new ideas combining all cultures, which will take their own culture to the universe and be legends in the entertainment industry.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, so, therefore, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, kind of, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 10.5418719212 95% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 6.10837438424 131% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 8.36945812808 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 5.94088669951 151% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 20.9802955665 110% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 31.9359605911 116% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 5.75862068966 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1222.0 1207.87684729 101% => OK
No of words: 241.0 242.827586207 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.07053941909 5.00649968141 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.94007293032 3.92707691288 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73061835108 2.71678728327 101% => OK
Unique words: 145.0 139.433497537 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.601659751037 0.580463131201 104% => OK
syllable_count: 386.1 379.143842365 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.6157635468 87% => OK
Article: 0.0 1.56157635468 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6551724138 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.5024630542 117% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.6812356185 50.4703680194 110% => OK
Chars per sentence: 122.2 104.977214359 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.1 20.9669160288 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.2 7.25397266985 141% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.33497536946 94% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 6.9802955665 72% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 2.75862068966 72% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 2.91625615764 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.156854826837 0.242375264174 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0698234680061 0.0925447433944 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0431451631293 0.071462118173 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0998668404154 0.151781067708 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0372211612329 0.0609392437508 61% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.5 12.6369458128 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 53.1260098522 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 10.9458128079 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.42 11.5310837438 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.95 8.32886699507 107% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 55.0591133005 114% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.94827586207 151% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.3980295567 112% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.5123152709 143% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 85.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 76.5 Out of 90
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