In spite of the advances made in agriculture, many people around the world still go hungry.
Why is this the case?
What can be done about this problem?
In this modern world, we can see many developments in many aspects of agriculture. In spite of the advancements still we can see hunger around the world. In this essay, I shall discuss on the the ways in which the agricultural developments have been achieved, the reason for scarcity of food and the possible solutions which ca be used in eradicating hunger from the earth.
First and foremost, many countries have achieved success in agricultural field due to the research done on the specific field. For instance, Mexican rice has improved the crops by twice and it could be use within less number of resources together with tolerance on extreme weather conditions. Some governments have construsted irrigation projects to acieve sustainable development in the field of the agriculture. In most part of the world, people started to use bare land for agriculture with the motive of increase production of crops. In addition, governments in developing countries give subsidies in fertilizer and pesticides in order to eradicate hunger from their country. The innovation of agricultural equipment has reduced human involvement in agricultural development as well.
Similarly, there is a possibility of food items become perished within short period of time. Lack of quality, speed transportation together with storage facilities would positively impact on waste of food items in majority of the continents in the world.However, develop countries sometimes dump their excess food in the sea, instead of distributing them to developing nations since it can reduce the market price for the particular product. Moreover, extreme weather conditions would also negatively affect on the supply of food in many circumstances.
In conclusion, governments need to invest on infrastructure on transport and storage facilities to mitigate the amount of food wastage. It is also believed that, policy decissions could be taken on popularizing gardening among their population due to satisfy some portion of their consumption domestically. Besides that, government should impose rigid regulations governing the usage of pesticides to control cancers in the society as, pesticides and other chemicals have bben identified as the main causes for these kind of disease in most of the countries.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, however, if, moreover, similarly, so, still, well, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, in short, kind of, in spite of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 72.0 41.998997996 171% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.3376753507 180% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1935.0 1615.20841683 120% => OK
No of words: 353.0 315.596192385 112% => OK
Chars per words: 5.48158640227 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.33454660006 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.13486267555 2.80592935109 112% => OK
Unique words: 201.0 176.041082164 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.56940509915 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 617.4 506.74238477 122% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 70.7736297407 49.4020404114 143% => OK
Chars per sentence: 129.0 106.682146367 121% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.5333333333 20.7667163134 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.0 7.06120827912 142% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.149755008184 0.244688304435 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0579974946139 0.084324248473 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0870593462669 0.0667982634062 130% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0970705158773 0.151304729494 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.104536144134 0.056905535591 184% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.1 13.0946893788 123% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 50.2224549098 79% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.8 12.4159519038 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.56 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 107.0 78.4519038076 136% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.