Each and every field of humanity is affected by technology even agriculture is not exception.However, instead of numerous development in farming, million of people around the globe still suffer from starvation.This phenomenon has several causes and solutions which will be discussed in the following segment of this essay.
To initiate with causes, why individuals is suffering from starvation, firstly poor management practices, to explain it, government make many policies to provide amenities to all natives but it is not properly implement on ground level,so poor person cannot take advantages of such policies.Backward regions such as UP, Jharkhnd where a large part of population is below poverty line, legislative authority are not effectively deal with such situation and there is high death rate because of starvation.Secondly, drastic increase in global population, to make it more clear, population is increase rapidly no doubt many improved techniques are used in farming but food production is low as compared to population exploration, it is impossible to provide food to everyone because land and natural resources are limited, this results into lack of food.
To address with this issue, vertical farming should be promoted, new methods of production should be introduced and encouraged to farmers get rid from traditional methods and adopt new technical methods to improve the production of crops.To deal with limited land problems, they should be moved towards vertical farming and earn profit and high yield.Apart from it, management practices are monitored on time to time to ensure that rules are followed and public can get benefit from it, various new policies should be made to uplift the level of mankind who lived below poverty line and food is distributed among them on cheaper price to deal with the problem of starvation.
To recapturised it,although advancement in agriculture has numerous outcomes but dealing with the problem of why people on world living still hungry is because poor cooperation and distribution schemes.So, to cope with this types are circumstances, mutual efforts should be done on wider level by individuals as well as by regime.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, however, if, second, secondly, so, still, well, apart from, no doubt, such as, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 23.0 13.1623246493 175% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 62.0 41.998997996 148% => OK
Nominalization: 23.0 8.3376753507 276% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1845.0 1615.20841683 114% => OK
No of words: 341.0 315.596192385 108% => OK
Chars per words: 5.41055718475 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.29722995808 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.12465510519 2.80592935109 111% => OK
Unique words: 198.0 176.041082164 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.58064516129 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 586.8 506.74238477 116% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 4.0 16.0721442886 25% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 85.0 20.2975951904 419% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 226.488824228 49.4020404114 458% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 461.25 106.682146367 432% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 85.25 20.7667163134 411% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 27.5 7.06120827912 389% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 13.0 5.01903807615 259% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 8.67935871743 12% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.175404236322 0.244688304435 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.117274127309 0.084324248473 139% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0584357624492 0.0667982634062 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.117274127309 0.151304729494 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0584357624492 0.056905535591 103% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 46.7 13.0946893788 357% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -23.26 50.2224549098 -46% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 19.3 7.44779559118 259% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 37.6 11.3001002004 333% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 15.28 12.4159519038 123% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 12.3 8.58950901804 143% => OK
difficult_words: 96.0 78.4519038076 122% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 31.5 9.78957915832 322% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 36.0 10.1190380762 356% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 47.0 10.7795591182 436% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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