Following the vouge in terms of outfits are considered more essential among the individuals . Behavior of wearing such type of attires have both favourable and unfavorable consequences . It seems to be boost the economic growth of any country but it may hurt the religious emotion of particular community .
To commence with positive side , one can develops their personality by wearing trendy garment . To elaborate it profoundly, while person wears these types of clothes they feel more confident in order to meet with other person . For example , some person think that are wealthy people therefore these outfits becomes the symbol of prestige . Moreover , it promotes cultural diversity because individual gets opportunity to adopt other nation 's tradition. Asian countries adopt Western culture is appropriate illustration of this aspect as well as it booms the economic growth in the form of tax because when person purchase trendy outfits then they contribute least amount of money in the treasure of government. That is why, these phenomenon has positive outcome to distinct field.
On the another hand, it may hurt the religious beliefs of specific region. To explain it, person are more fascinated towards other Nation's custom. Due to this, it may indirectly left the adverse impact on that area. For example, in pakistan, where few women were died because they wore Western dresses. Further more, this trend makes people spendthrift because fashion cannot be constant it is vary in few months but people more tempt to purchase new clothes while updating them with the new trend so they purchase more clothes consequently, they become extravagant therefore, it has demerits too.
From what has been discussed above it can be concluded that although it has positive outcomes but its negative outcomes cannot be overlooked. It rise the economic growth however, it makes extravagant.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, however, if, look, may, moreover, so, then, therefore, well, while, for example, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 24.0651302605 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1592.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 299.0 315.596192385 95% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.32441471572 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1583189471 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.724828837 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 183.0 176.041082164 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.612040133779 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 508.5 506.74238477 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 5.43587174349 202% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 64.464591783 49.4020404114 130% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.5 106.682146367 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.6875 20.7667163134 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.875 7.06120827912 97% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 15.0 5.01903807615 299% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.232910345037 0.244688304435 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.059861425927 0.084324248473 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0635776619599 0.0667982634062 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.117977908238 0.151304729494 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0548038436438 0.056905535591 96% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 50.2224549098 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.58 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.02 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 78.4519038076 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.