More and more people are finding it increasingly important to wear fashionable clothes Is this attitude to wearing clothes a positive or negative development

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More and more people are finding it increasingly important to wear fashionable clothes.
Is this attitude to wearing clothes a positive or negative development?

In today’s modernized world, where societies around the glove is giving enormous importance to latest and trendy attires, especially due to influence of western world. In my opinion, this is a negative development affecting younger generation emotionally, financially as well as from health perspective. In this essay, I shall presents banes of the fashion industry on an individual as well as on the society.

Firstly, fashion industry has ingrained psychological dependencies on the society in a way that it resulted in a form of addiction towards it. Furthermore, such enormous importance of fashion on society requires people to get in shape, similar to zero shaped or highly fit celebrities, which requires people to go on strict diet and strenuous workouts which can impact health of people who look for fast results. Secondly, following trendy fashion needs a lot of money to be invested. Consequently, people who cannot afford such a luxury, might either financially overburden himself or feel a sense of envy towards his fellow citizen. Thirdly and more importantly, following western fashion in conservation societies might result in various social issues. For instance, in a country like Saudi Arabia it is highly unlikely for woman to openly practice western fashion. If they do so, might result in social problems.

On the other hand, following fashion does have certain pros such as, it keeps society updated with global trend. Moreover, it helps an individual to adapt to different cultures. For example, if at all a person plans to work for multi-national country or plans to migrate to foreign land for job or study related prospects then his taste towards fashion can come handy.

To conclude, in today’s time, younger generation is blindly following fashion industry and considers it to be incumbent criteria to look good. Above all, enormous amount of money is being spent on it. Such an attitude is morally incorrect resulting in various social issues both on individual as well as on society. Therefore, an optimum level of fashion must be acquired by society.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, first, firstly, furthermore, if, look, moreover, second, secondly, so, then, therefore, third, thirdly, well, for example, for instance, such as, as well as, in my opinion, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 52.0 41.998997996 124% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1768.0 1615.20841683 109% => OK
No of words: 336.0 315.596192385 106% => OK
Chars per words: 5.2619047619 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.28139028586 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.91634473442 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 194.0 176.041082164 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.577380952381 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 552.6 506.74238477 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.2613182427 49.4020404114 110% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.0 106.682146367 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.7647058824 20.7667163134 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.0 7.06120827912 170% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.136315649479 0.244688304435 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0395340028713 0.084324248473 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0322655763952 0.0667982634062 48% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.075048262699 0.151304729494 50% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0374021029455 0.056905535591 66% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 13.0946893788 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.23 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.9 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 92.0 78.4519038076 117% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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