Some people think that keeping pets is good for children while others think it is dangerous and unhealthy. Which opinion do you agree with? Discuss both options and give examples.
Many children have a hobby of breeding pet animals and they simply love doing it. However, there is now a growing debate among the people if it is good for children’s development or does it have negative influence on their health. Despite the fact that certain health complications might arise if the pets are not kept clean, I still believe that the positives of having a pet outweigh the negatives.
Allowing children to have pets brings a plethora of benefits to their psychological development in many different ways. Compassion, firstly, is the most important quality a child learns from grooming the pets. In the process of taking care of domestic animals, it is obvious that a child learns how to take care of them, feed them at right times and vaccinate them when they fall ill. As a result, a child becomes soft-hearted towards their colleagues and siblings.
Psychological development and creativity, secondly, are greatly boosted when a child fosters the habit of having pets. A child gains lot of general knowledge when they learn about the various breeds and the different necessities each animal have. A recent research at Cambridge University of Medical sciences has concluded that children having the noble habit of taking care of pet animals have shown to possess better creativity and higher power of persistence. Therefore, there is clearly some correlation between these positive characteristics with the hobby of keeping pets.
On the other hand, some medical professionals have also raised concerns relate to medical complications. Such as, asthma and viral infections as a result of having pets at home. Although, this is true to some extent but these conditions arise mostly when we do not practice cleanliness. However, if we take care of their health and cleanliness seriously then issues can be avoided. Furthermore, they have to be frequently vaccinated against the viral infections.
From the above argument, it can be concluded that children having habit of breeding the pets is obviously a positive aspect, especially, considering the enormous benefits it brings in the overall development of a child. Therefore, I staunchly support the idea of allowing the growing children to have an accompanying growing pet partner.
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Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'recent research'.
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...different necessities each animal have. A recent research at Cambridge University of Medical scie...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, second, secondly, so, still, then, therefore, such as, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1907.0 1615.20841683 118% => OK
No of words: 363.0 315.596192385 115% => OK
Chars per words: 5.25344352617 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.3649236973 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.95368966653 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 198.0 176.041082164 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.545454545455 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 587.7 506.74238477 116% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.5110316649 49.4020404114 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.944444444 106.682146367 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.1666666667 20.7667163134 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.66666666667 7.06120827912 109% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 8.67935871743 161% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.10708020314 0.244688304435 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0381221685713 0.084324248473 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0355353767494 0.0667982634062 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0673110157245 0.151304729494 44% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0344895126871 0.056905535591 61% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.17 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.89 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 98.0 78.4519038076 125% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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