Large shopping malls are replacing small shops. What is your opinion about it? Discuss with appropriate examples
Modern man has raised from the bullock cart age to the computer era at a breakneck speed , accompanied by vast improvements in the standards of living. Likewise, nowadays mostly small shops are replacing due to build biggest shopping malls. This topic has both merits and demerits, So I will discuss this topic and give my opinion in upcoming paragraphs.
To begin with, some people think, change is the law of nature, so that everyone should accept some changes along with time to time, because it necessary for development. Moreover, all goods are provided in the big malls like cosmetic things, grocery and other plastic things, due to which people do not have to go to other shops, which save their time and energy. Besides this, employment is also increased, because many people get work in the big malls, due to which they can earn good and live luxurious life. After that, this purposal also improve the economy of the country.
On the other hand, many people say that when new shopping malls are built, then they replace the small shops, sue to which their owners have to face some financial problems. Furthermore, the people who are unable to develop the new business, it is proved very bad for them, due to which sometime they choose astray for earning.
In conclusion, every coin has two sides, likewise this topic also has mixed bag. But according to my opinion development is necessary for every nation, but the individuals their shops are destroyed to make large malls, government should provide them financial help, that’s why they will also able to develop their new bu
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, furthermore, if, likewise, moreover, so, then, in conclusion, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 10.5418719212 85% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 6.10837438424 82% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 8.36945812808 84% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 5.94088669951 168% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 20.9802955665 110% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 31.9359605911 100% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 5.75862068966 69% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1324.0 1207.87684729 110% => OK
No of words: 271.0 242.827586207 112% => OK
Chars per words: 4.88560885609 5.00649968141 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05734859645 3.92707691288 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.40624368062 2.71678728327 89% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 139.433497537 120% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.619926199262 0.580463131201 107% => OK
syllable_count: 408.6 379.143842365 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.57093596059 95% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.6157635468 65% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 1.71428571429 233% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.931034482759 215% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 3.65517241379 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6551724138 87% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.5024630542 117% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.7028289103 50.4703680194 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.363636364 104.977214359 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.6363636364 20.9669160288 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.3636363636 7.25397266985 143% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.33497536946 37% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 6.9802955665 100% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 2.75862068966 72% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 2.91625615764 69% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.146427206237 0.242375264174 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0530913225465 0.0925447433944 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0621962762879 0.071462118173 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0880809388666 0.151781067708 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0323246089569 0.0609392437508 53% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 12.6369458128 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 53.1260098522 105% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.9458128079 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.38 11.5310837438 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.32 8.32886699507 100% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 55.0591133005 109% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.94827586207 111% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.3980295567 112% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.5123152709 114% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 80.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 72.0 Out of 90
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