Large shopping malls are replacing small shops. What is your opinion on this? Do you think this is a good or bad change?
Large shopping malls are replacing small shops has always been a debatable topic. Many people believe that mall culture should be promoted as it is convenient to customers. I strongly agree with the statement that significant benefits of large shopping malls are high compared to traditional small shops. This will be analyzed by looking at how much convenient it is and what economic benefits have made them the most preferred choice for customers.
Firstly, the infrastructure of shopping malls facilitates customers to shop easily. For example, malls are equipped with large private parking space, lavatories, food courts, cinema halls, air conditioning and entertainment areas which make them much more desirable than traditional shopping malls. One can spend an entire day with their family or friends as there is something for everyone. Looking at this example it is clear why malls are preferred over shops. Thus, they are considered from all aspects by the majority of the population.
Secondly, malls are proven good for the economy as they generate more income, create many employment opportunities. For instance, the sheer size and variety of products may attract a wide variety of customers. Consequently, malls earn a lot of revenue as well as create mass business opportunities to people. These benefits prove that why they are replacing small shops.
This above analysis proves that significant economic benefits and ease of shopping have made malls desirable over traditional shops. In a nutshell, even though there are few benefits from traditional small shops, the advantages of large malls outweigh them. So it is predicted that mall trend will continue in near future.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, first, firstly, if, look, may, second, secondly, so, thus, well, for example, for instance, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 10.5418719212 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 6.10837438424 82% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 8.36945812808 60% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 5.94088669951 101% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 20.9802955665 100% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 31.9359605911 85% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 5.75862068966 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1433.0 1207.87684729 119% => OK
No of words: 267.0 242.827586207 110% => OK
Chars per words: 5.3670411985 5.00649968141 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04229324003 3.92707691288 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79350037068 2.71678728327 103% => OK
Unique words: 157.0 139.433497537 113% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.588014981273 0.580463131201 101% => OK
syllable_count: 446.4 379.143842365 118% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 4.6157635468 108% => OK
Article: 3.0 1.56157635468 192% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.65517241379 27% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 12.6551724138 126% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.5024630542 78% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 37.4714474634 50.4703680194 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.5625 104.977214359 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.6875 20.9669160288 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.25 7.25397266985 100% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.33497536946 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 6.9802955665 186% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 2.75862068966 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 2.91625615764 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.285756660514 0.242375264174 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0965654912747 0.0925447433944 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0756944622115 0.071462118173 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.180941861028 0.151781067708 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0574680229685 0.0609392437508 94% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 12.6369458128 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.78 53.1260098522 88% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.9458128079 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.57 11.5310837438 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.21 8.32886699507 99% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 55.0591133005 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.94827586207 90% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.3980295567 81% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 72.2222222222 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 65.0 Out of 90
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