Large shopping malls are replacing small shops. Your opinion? Good or bad?
In these days, there is no denying the reality that small shops are being replaced by large shopping malls. While many people believe that the changes bring about positive impact to people’s live, others feel that the opposite is also correct. This essay offers some insights on both the merits and demerits of the development.
Perhaps, the greatest benefit people can enjoy from the large shopping malls is the convenience that they bring about. This is because the customers can get virtually all kind of products and services in one place. As a result, it would save people a great deal of time and traveling expense since they need not go to different places to get different items. Another advantage of large shopping malls is that they are equipped with modern facilities and infrastructure. To give an illustration, people can enjoy the air-conditioned environment while shopping, which augments their shopping experiences.
Nonetheless, like two sides of a same coin, large shopping malls also create many problems. The most obvious negative impact is that these shopping centers are usually located at the city center. As such, those who are residing far away from the city center may find it inconvenient to shop there. This is true especially in case of emergency and urgency, one may opt for small shops because it is much nearer, let alone the fact that the prices can be sometimes cheaper and negotiable.
In conclusion, from the above analysis, it is clear that large shopping centers allow people to enjoy many great benefits, they also bring upon a number of drawbacks to others’ lives and society.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, may, nonetheless, so, while, in conclusion, kind of, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 10.5418719212 142% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 6.10837438424 131% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 8.36945812808 84% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 5.94088669951 168% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 20.9802955665 110% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 31.9359605911 100% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 5.75862068966 69% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1369.0 1207.87684729 113% => OK
No of words: 269.0 242.827586207 111% => OK
Chars per words: 5.08921933086 5.00649968141 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0498419064 3.92707691288 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67553159974 2.71678728327 98% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 139.433497537 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.598513011152 0.580463131201 103% => OK
syllable_count: 424.8 379.143842365 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 4.6157635468 152% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.71428571429 175% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.65517241379 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6551724138 103% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.5024630542 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.701943059 50.4703680194 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.307692308 104.977214359 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.6923076923 20.9669160288 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.69230769231 7.25397266985 78% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.33497536946 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 6.9802955665 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 2.75862068966 145% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.198891488576 0.242375264174 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0781445041081 0.0925447433944 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0811138717739 0.071462118173 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.12008793626 0.151781067708 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0300668245401 0.0609392437508 49% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 12.6369458128 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 53.1260098522 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.9458128079 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.24 11.5310837438 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.56 8.32886699507 103% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 55.0591133005 122% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.94827586207 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.3980295567 96% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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