Law can change human behavior. Do you agree or not?
It is irrefutable to say that changing human behavior by law has burgeoned to become a controversial issue. Although it is regarded by a considerable number of people that this changing can have profound adverse effects on peoples` lifestyle, I am inclined to highly believe that it is quite beneficial and should be promoted. This essay will elucidate some reasons why such change by the government is more rational.
From a social point of view, changing individual's behavior is indeed bound to encouraging nations to be a well-behavior person, which means it might lead to both freedom and healthy society. For example, a group of reputable social cientists, working at a prestigious university, conducted a longitudinal study to understand the relationship between enforcing by a government and strict regulations as well as breaking the law. Therefore, this evidence presented thus far support the connection that such changing is positively correlated with not only legal activities but also social training.
In social terms, the changing is undoubtedly attributable to breaking the law, in that it would lead to community service, prison, and offenses. A well-known example of such attributions is a financial penalty, which is cause for concern since it had been mistaken in taking rehabilitation for granted.Had it done petty crime in advance, it might have had the opportunity to do re-offend. Thus, governments could play a significant role in would-be obedient person and social behavior.
To conclude, while there are several compelling arguments for changing human behavior by law, my personal sentiment is that it could have a positive effect on our societies.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 303, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Had
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, therefore, thus, well, while, for example, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 10.5418719212 142% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 6.10837438424 147% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 8.36945812808 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 5.94088669951 135% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 20.9802955665 100% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 31.9359605911 100% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 5.75862068966 122% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1427.0 1207.87684729 118% => OK
No of words: 264.0 242.827586207 109% => OK
Chars per words: 5.4053030303 5.00649968141 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03089032464 3.92707691288 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.17591217745 2.71678728327 117% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 139.433497537 120% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.636363636364 0.580463131201 110% => OK
syllable_count: 448.2 379.143842365 118% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 4.6157635468 130% => OK
Article: 3.0 1.56157635468 192% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6551724138 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.5024630542 127% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 54.1635486282 50.4703680194 107% => OK
Chars per sentence: 142.7 104.977214359 136% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.4 20.9669160288 126% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.2 7.25397266985 99% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.33497536946 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 6.9802955665 86% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 2.75862068966 109% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.253529693124 0.242375264174 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.101937315994 0.0925447433944 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0797923653745 0.071462118173 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.157585277815 0.151781067708 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0499637200638 0.0609392437508 82% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.3 12.6369458128 137% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 36.63 53.1260098522 69% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.54236453202 171% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 10.9458128079 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.39 11.5310837438 125% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.89 8.32886699507 119% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 55.0591133005 151% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.94827586207 151% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.3980295567 119% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.5123152709 143% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 88.8888888889 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 80.0 Out of 90
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