Law can change human behavior. Do you agree or not?
Nowadays, the influence of law on person’s behavior has become a long-running dispute among the public all over that world, which leads to moot question “whether a law can change human behavior or not?”. It is a widely held view that imposing several rules is highly beneficial, whereas I tend to believe that one must weigh up carefully the pros and cons of this issue.
To begin with, it is a common belief that the phenomenon of law enforcement plays a vital role in the behavior of each society. Therefore, I express several reasons to support this idea. First and foremost is that the crime rate and the motivation of committing the offense will be diminished. Secondly, the prevalence crimes, such as embezzlement, theft, corruption decrease in the communities. In addition to this information, the majority of laws are efficient, including the traffic light and fastening seatbelt that guarantee the people’s lives. A very tangible example to illustrate would be Thailand that smuggling the drugs is excessively prevalent, while the government could rehabilitate offenders.
However, undoubtedly law enforcement provides people with various negative points. For instance, the fear will be developed in the society due to the death penalty or prolonged captivations. Moreover, the criminals will be encouraged to revenge after prison and the aggressive behavior might be raised. A very tangible example to illustrate would be South Korea's nation has been deprived of their civil rights because of unreasonable laws.
To recapitulate, I entirely agree that imposing laws can restrict and change people’s behavior. However, as every garden may have some weeds, the local authorities are recommended to enforce stricter legislation, and individuals are hoped to heighten their intellect.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
...aw on person's behavior has become a long-running dispute among the public all over that ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, may, moreover, second, secondly, so, therefore, whereas, while, for instance, in addition, such as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 10.5418719212 142% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 6.10837438424 180% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 8.36945812808 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 5.94088669951 151% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 20.9802955665 86% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 31.9359605911 94% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 5.75862068966 226% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1547.0 1207.87684729 128% => OK
No of words: 280.0 242.827586207 115% => OK
Chars per words: 5.525 5.00649968141 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09062348924 3.92707691288 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.11896560234 2.71678728327 115% => OK
Unique words: 179.0 139.433497537 128% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.639285714286 0.580463131201 110% => OK
syllable_count: 486.0 379.143842365 128% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.6157635468 87% => OK
Article: 8.0 1.56157635468 512% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.65517241379 82% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6551724138 111% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.5024630542 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.5317335994 50.4703680194 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.5 104.977214359 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0 20.9669160288 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.21428571429 7.25397266985 127% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.33497536946 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 6.9802955665 72% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 2.75862068966 290% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.217451394814 0.242375264174 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0645664318826 0.0925447433944 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.110129959883 0.071462118173 154% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.133268549663 0.151781067708 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0764289106505 0.0609392437508 125% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.6 12.6369458128 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 53.1260098522 80% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 10.9458128079 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.79 11.5310837438 128% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.04 8.32886699507 121% => OK
difficult_words: 96.0 55.0591133005 174% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.94827586207 141% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.3980295567 96% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.5123152709 143% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 85.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 76.5 Out of 90
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