In many countries, people are moving away from rural areas and towards urban areas.Why do you think that is? What problems can cause this?

In 20th century urbanization is one the problem in different nations. Most of the countries in world People's left from countryside and settle in cities for living. Migration of individuals from rural to urban leads some serious detrimental problems. Thise essay will discus the problems of urbanization along with the reason of my opinion.

To begin with, metropolitan cities are the hub for jobs thuse people's can get their dream job.For instance, when it commpared to the countryside, cities has huge number of companies which offer work with attractive salary consequently, it leads rural people migrate to the cities. Another factor which influence the rural individual is transportation one can get easily even though if it is mid night. Unlike villages, buses, railways transport facilities are high In cities.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, if, so, thus, for instance, to begin with

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 10.5418719212 47% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 6.10837438424 49% => OK
Conjunction : 1.0 8.36945812808 12% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 5.94088669951 50% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 5.0 20.9802955665 24% => OK
Preposition: 19.0 31.9359605911 59% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 6.0 5.75862068966 104% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 691.0 1207.87684729 57% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 129.0 242.827586207 53% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.35658914729 5.00649968141 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.37013600491 3.92707691288 86% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87508082987 2.71678728327 106% => OK
Unique words: 91.0 139.433497537 65% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.705426356589 0.580463131201 122% => OK
syllable_count: 212.4 379.143842365 56% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 4.6157635468 22% => OK
Article: 0.0 1.56157635468 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.65517241379 55% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 12.6551724138 55% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 20.5024630542 88% => OK
Sentence length SD: 69.9448762547 50.4703680194 139% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.7142857143 104.977214359 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.4285714286 20.9669160288 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.85714285714 7.25397266985 108% => OK
Paragraphs: 2.0 4.12807881773 48% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 18.0 5.33497536946 337% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 6.9802955665 29% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 2.75862068966 109% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 2.91625615764 69% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.156751992051 0.242375264174 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0709987293723 0.0925447433944 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0342023968015 0.071462118173 48% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.127445646184 0.151781067708 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0454350680536 0.0609392437508 75% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 12.6369458128 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 53.1260098522 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.9458128079 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.81 11.5310837438 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.92 8.32886699507 119% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 55.0591133005 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.94827586207 111% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.3980295567 88% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.5123152709 95% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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More content wanted.
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Minimum 200 words wanted.

Rates: 22.2222222222 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.0 Out of 90
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