In many cultures, the priority is given to marriage over employment. What's your opinion on getting married without worrying about getting a job?
This issue raises a controversy about getting married before getting a job.
The point of contention calls for it is analysis by various perspectives.
However, it is evident that is important think in your professional life before married.
At the outset, there are several reasons why it can be stated that being married before starting a job,
bring for the family a financial problem. The first being is that some part should be financial supported
for the one that is working. Furthermore, a critical element of this is become financial dependent could be a first married problem.
To cite an example on the matter, my friend Nicoleta got married before start her career and she need ask money for her husband all the time,
to buy thinks to our own used, but they starting some discussing because she spend a lot, with her clothes.
On the other hand, some people tend to believe that is important for womens starting her lifes married and after get a job,
because the partner can help with her education after married. Correspondingly, it is a crucial to note that womens in this day prefer get married after organize a professional life.
Moreover, this idea is wells supported by the fact that womens have the professional life already stopped when they get pregnant.
that. To cite an example on the matter Paula my sister, get married and starting university after that she got pregnant and have to stop university, after this situation she never finished the graduation and never started a career.
In conclusion, it is evident that is a tremendous problem get married before start a professional life. However, as every garden may have some weeds,
the local authorities are recommended to enforce stricter legislation, and individuals are hope to heighten their intellect.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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...hat being married before starting a job, bring for the family a financial problem...
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... some part should be financial supported for the one that is working. Furthermore...
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... ask money for her husband all the time, to buy thinks to our own used, but they ...
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Suggestion: spends
...ey starting some discussing because she spend a lot, with her clothes. On the othe...
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...g her lifes married and after get a job, because the partner can help with her ed...
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Suggestion: That
...lready stopped when they get pregnant. that. To cite an example on the matter Paula...
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...er, as every garden may have some weeds, the local authorities are recommended to...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, furthermore, however, if, may, moreover, so, well, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 10.5418719212 180% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 6.10837438424 98% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 8.36945812808 84% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 5.94088669951 168% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 20.9802955665 167% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 33.0 31.9359605911 103% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 5.75862068966 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1509.0 1207.87684729 125% => OK
No of words: 299.0 242.827586207 123% => OK
Chars per words: 5.04682274247 5.00649968141 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1583189471 3.92707691288 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73764563789 2.71678728327 101% => OK
Unique words: 157.0 139.433497537 113% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.52508361204 0.580463131201 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 465.3 379.143842365 123% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 4.6157635468 130% => OK
Article: 4.0 1.56157635468 256% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 1.71428571429 175% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.931034482759 215% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 8.0 3.65517241379 219% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6551724138 103% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.5024630542 112% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.1507884572 50.4703680194 109% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.076923077 104.977214359 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.0 20.9669160288 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.30769230769 7.25397266985 101% => OK
Paragraphs: 14.0 4.12807881773 339% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 7.0 5.33497536946 131% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 6.9802955665 86% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 2.75862068966 145% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 2.91625615764 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.146445874881 0.242375264174 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0678390029411 0.0925447433944 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0767310117332 0.071462118173 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0620824497975 0.151781067708 41% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0753921224742 0.0609392437508 124% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 12.6369458128 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 53.1260098522 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 10.9458128079 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.31 11.5310837438 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.95 8.32886699507 95% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 55.0591133005 109% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.94827586207 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.3980295567 108% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.5123152709 114% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.