In many modern societies, grandchildren rarely spend any quality time with their grandparents.
What do you think are the consequences of this?
Since the beginning of the 21st century, people have changed their lifestyle, where most of them now live in big cities. Some people believe that these movements will prevent grandparents from spending time with their grandchildren, so they assume this will suppress transferring traditions and habits from the upper generation to the lower generation, while others argue that this will improve people characters. This essay will discuss the consequences of stopping the meeting between the grandchildren and their grandparents.
Firstly, the major consequence of this phenomenon is the heritage will not move to the following generation. Some families have some special traditions which present the symbols of their families. For example, in Jordan, due to lack of meeting between the grandparents and the grandchildren, the youth do not speak the language of their grandparents. Therefore, it this will lead to losing the cultures and heritages of some families.
On the other hand, stop meeting between grandchildren and their grandparent will lead to enhancing some characters. Grandchildren will improve their characters based on their surroundings rather than their traditions. For example, grandchildren in Jordan now they learn new habits which are suitable for their environment. Thus, preventing the meeting between grandparents and grandchildren will have a good consequence.
In conclusion, spending little time with grandparents could have either a positive or a negative consequence. In my opinion, I believe that heritages and traditions are very important.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, if, so, therefore, thus, while, for example, in conclusion, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 10.5418719212 28% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 6.10837438424 164% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 8.36945812808 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 5.94088669951 101% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 20.9802955665 119% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 31.9359605911 91% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 5.75862068966 122% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1349.0 1207.87684729 112% => OK
No of words: 235.0 242.827586207 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.74042553191 5.00649968141 115% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.91531732006 3.92707691288 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.18578213102 2.71678728327 117% => OK
Unique words: 125.0 139.433497537 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.531914893617 0.580463131201 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 387.9 379.143842365 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.6157635468 65% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.65517241379 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6551724138 103% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.5024630542 88% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.1458860788 50.4703680194 105% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.769230769 104.977214359 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0769230769 20.9669160288 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.30769230769 7.25397266985 115% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.33497536946 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 6.9802955665 72% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 2.75862068966 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 2.91625615764 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.214438527729 0.242375264174 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0854767956971 0.0925447433944 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0588418733269 0.071462118173 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.137428902971 0.151781067708 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0367264499836 0.0609392437508 60% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.6 12.6369458128 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 53.1260098522 84% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.9458128079 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.72 11.5310837438 136% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.22 8.32886699507 99% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 55.0591133005 100% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.94827586207 111% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.3980295567 88% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.5123152709 105% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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