Many people choose to migrate to other countries. What are the advantages and disadvantages of living in a foreign country? Discuss with your own experience.
Nowadays, the phenomenon of migrating to a foreign country for work or study has become a popular trend. Although contested by many that migrating to other countries has benefits, such action is regarded thoroughly both positive and constructive by a number of individuals. In my opinion, I am inclined to believe that migration provides better work and education opportunity for individuals, as well as helps create cultural diversity for the host country, and I will discuss its advantages and disadvantages in the following essay.
To begin with, moving to another country challenges individuals with different culture, language and living style that could be difficult in the beginning. People who found hard to adjust often experience culture shock and discrimination in the foreign country. While others who successfully adapt to the new society earn higher salary and are valued as an important member of the community. For instance, 77% of migration in the new country had negative experience in the first year, however, only 5% of them continue having the similar problem. Therefore, it is impossible to deny the challenges once relocating to a foreign country, however they ultimately allow individuals to grow and widen the horizon.
Furthermore, host countries are benefit from multiculturalism and innovation that migrates bring to their society. According to one of my study which I conducted in university, countries such as Australia, America and United Kingdom are the three major countries that benefit from culture diversity. It is reported that migrates accounted for 55% of American innovative industry and 32% of Australian technology related sector. Thus, migration bring countries diversity and new ideas which improve everyone’s lives.
In conclusion, I believe that the benefit of migration to a foreign country far outweight its drawbacks which shall be well handled and learned as precious lessons.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, furthermore, however, if, so, therefore, thus, well, while, for instance, in conclusion, such as, as well as, in my opinion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 10.5418719212 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 6.10837438424 49% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 8.36945812808 167% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 5.94088669951 202% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 20.0 20.9802955665 95% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 31.9359605911 113% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 5.75862068966 174% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1643.0 1207.87684729 136% => OK
No of words: 298.0 242.827586207 123% => OK
Chars per words: 5.51342281879 5.00649968141 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15483772266 3.92707691288 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.07090985954 2.71678728327 113% => OK
Unique words: 179.0 139.433497537 128% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.60067114094 0.580463131201 103% => OK
syllable_count: 518.4 379.143842365 137% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.6157635468 87% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.71428571429 175% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6551724138 103% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.5024630542 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.4273831415 50.4703680194 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 126.384615385 104.977214359 120% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.9230769231 20.9669160288 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.1538461538 7.25397266985 154% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.33497536946 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 6.9802955665 129% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 2.75862068966 145% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 2.91625615764 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.246421248072 0.242375264174 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0796488425593 0.0925447433944 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0350964464681 0.071462118173 49% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.134823751363 0.151781067708 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0389327656811 0.0609392437508 64% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.0 12.6369458128 127% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 53.1260098522 77% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.54236453202 171% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 10.9458128079 120% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.97 11.5310837438 130% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.55 8.32886699507 115% => OK
difficult_words: 91.0 55.0591133005 165% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.94827586207 151% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.3980295567 104% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.5123152709 143% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 85.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 76.5 Out of 90
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