Many people think that regions affect successful person. What is your opinion about native region and accomplished person’s influence on the region he belongs to?
Nowadays, the influence of the region on accomplished person has become a long-running dispute among the public all over the world, which leads to a moot question, “whether the native area can influence on the prosperity of the accomplished person or not?”. It is a widely held view that the native region affects the successful person, whereas I tend to believe that one must weigh up carefully the pros and cons of this issue.
To begin with, it is a common belief that a secure community or accomplished person plays a vital role in the society. First and foremost is that living in a country with acceptable social structure contributes youth to have a sound education, more job opportunities, and enjoy high living standard. Secondly, interaction with successful peers or influential figures with the remarkable position will encourage others to follow their approach in terms of educational fields or business. In addition to this information, it should be mentioned that peer pressure to commit crime or violence acts can tempt youth to deteriorate their future lives.
However, undoubtedly being under effects of people or region to reach success provides people with various points. It should be taken into account that the majority of accomplished scientists could reach the summit of prosperity just with hardworking and the native region has not had any profound impact in their lives. Moreover, it is quite clear that people are able to increase their earning capacity or promote the education just by enough interpersonal or intellectual skills.
To recapitulate, I firmly believe that the native region or accomplished peer will have an influential impact on people’s success. However, as every garden may have some weeds, the local authorities are recommended to enforce stricter legislation, and individuals are hoped to heighten their intellect.(
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, may, moreover, second, secondly, so, whereas, in addition, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 10.5418719212 95% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 6.10837438424 147% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 8.36945812808 167% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 5.94088669951 151% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 20.9802955665 105% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 31.9359605911 122% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 5.75862068966 191% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1593.0 1207.87684729 132% => OK
No of words: 297.0 242.827586207 122% => OK
Chars per words: 5.36363636364 5.00649968141 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15134772569 3.92707691288 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.01971588639 2.71678728327 111% => OK
Unique words: 176.0 139.433497537 126% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.592592592593 0.580463131201 102% => OK
syllable_count: 495.9 379.143842365 131% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 4.6157635468 130% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.931034482759 215% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 3.65517241379 82% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6551724138 87% => OK
Sentence length: 27.0 20.5024630542 132% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 40.7639850768 50.4703680194 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 144.818181818 104.977214359 138% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.0 20.9669160288 129% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.45454545455 7.25397266985 117% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.33497536946 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 6.9802955665 143% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 2.75862068966 36% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 2.91625615764 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.298497216337 0.242375264174 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.109562307489 0.0925447433944 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.107620408622 0.071462118173 151% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.183275121524 0.151781067708 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.117970414761 0.0609392437508 194% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.3 12.6369458128 137% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 35.61 53.1260098522 67% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.54236453202 171% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 10.9458128079 137% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.1 11.5310837438 122% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.6 8.32886699507 115% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 55.0591133005 158% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.94827586207 146% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.3980295567 123% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.5123152709 143% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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