Many young people get married before finishing their study and establishing a good job. To what extent do you agree? Please explain.
There is no denying the fact that many youngsters get married before completing there education and obtaining a good job.while some individuals believe that they
can find a better life after the marriage, others advocate that. This essay will elaborate both the arguments and thus will lead to a logical conclusion.
On the one hand, most of the people can reach their target easily during their childhood and the time period they are living with their parents. Few conspicuous causes are not only they need to find school fees, university fees, and other expenses, but also their parents are responsible for that. For example, in countries like Sri Lanka, they are not allowed to work during their study time. It should also be emphasized that it will have far reaching positive
effects on the community.
On the other hand, trying to do studies and obtaining a job after marriage is some times might be difficult. Because, after starting a new life as a husband or a wife.they have a lot of responsibilities and duties to do.For example, If they had a baby, in my experience I would say it is very hard.Therefore do educational tasks and finding a job after marriage is not a suitable thing to do.
In summary, thinking to get married before to finish studies should think twice.There fore I think every child should encourage to learn well when they live under parents and after that need to find a better life partner.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, therefore, thus, well, while, for example, i think, in summary, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 10.5418719212 95% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 6.10837438424 196% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 8.36945812808 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 5.94088669951 118% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 20.9802955665 119% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 31.9359605911 94% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 5.75862068966 35% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1193.0 1207.87684729 99% => OK
No of words: 246.0 242.827586207 101% => OK
Chars per words: 4.84959349593 5.00649968141 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96035189615 3.92707691288 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63748157819 2.71678728327 97% => OK
Unique words: 147.0 139.433497537 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.59756097561 0.580463131201 103% => OK
syllable_count: 373.5 379.143842365 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.57093596059 95% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.6157635468 87% => OK
Article: 0.0 1.56157635468 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.71428571429 175% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.931034482759 215% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 3.65517241379 164% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6551724138 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.5024630542 132% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 66.4938500823 50.4703680194 132% => OK
Chars per sentence: 132.555555556 104.977214359 126% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.3333333333 20.9669160288 130% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.1111111111 7.25397266985 153% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.12807881773 145% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 6.0 5.33497536946 112% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 6.9802955665 100% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 2.75862068966 36% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.184719549493 0.242375264174 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0709355593392 0.0925447433944 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0500155594602 0.071462118173 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0831716511592 0.151781067708 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0677881162562 0.0609392437508 111% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.1 12.6369458128 119% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.53 53.1260098522 99% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.6 10.9458128079 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.15 11.5310837438 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.44 8.32886699507 101% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 55.0591133005 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.94827586207 141% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.3980295567 123% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.5123152709 124% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 78.8888888889 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 71.0 Out of 90
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