Some people say that laws change human behavior. Do you agree or disagree.
Laws have a vital role in our society. They are laid by the government and required to keep the society and country in an order and harmony. Considering this, some people believe that laws can change human behavior, while others think law only give direction to humans so that chaos in society can be prevented. This essay focuses on both sides of the argument and asserts of the appropriate conclusion. Let us delve deeper into it.
To begin, laws play an essential role in development of the society. It helps in smooth functioning of the nation by governing the behavior of people. For instance, traffic lights helps people to travel easily without creating any chaos.
However, enforcing laws can place limits on the behavior of people, It really never can change the human nature which is immutable. This seems to be a very plausible point. On the other hand, imposing laws has created a sense of fear among people of getting punished.
For instance, damaging the historical monuments, books or another form of art is considered a crime and is punishable under vandalism law. It infuses a fear in the public that if hey do some illegal activity, they will be punished. If this fear will not be there, then the instances and terrorism and crimes will increase that will make the life of the members of society unstable and disturbed. Laws make our lives comfortable.
In conclusion, we can say that rules and regulations can help in controlling the behavior that is dangerous. Laws not only help in checking the reckless nature of people but are necessary for the development of society.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, really, so, then, while, for instance, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 10.5418719212 95% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 6.10837438424 164% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 8.36945812808 131% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 5.94088669951 118% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 20.9802955665 95% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 31.9359605911 116% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 5.75862068966 122% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1335.0 1207.87684729 111% => OK
No of words: 273.0 242.827586207 112% => OK
Chars per words: 4.89010989011 5.00649968141 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06481385082 3.92707691288 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61920386839 2.71678728327 96% => OK
Unique words: 157.0 139.433497537 113% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.575091575092 0.580463131201 99% => OK
syllable_count: 418.5 379.143842365 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.57093596059 95% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 4.6157635468 173% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.325123152709 0% => OK
Article: 0.0 1.56157635468 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 12.6551724138 134% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.5024630542 78% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 41.6385833849 50.4703680194 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 78.5294117647 104.977214359 75% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.0588235294 20.9669160288 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.23529411765 7.25397266985 72% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.12807881773 121% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.33497536946 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 6.9802955665 86% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 2.75862068966 290% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 2.91625615764 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.2598928578 0.242375264174 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.070349266779 0.0925447433944 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0719068971571 0.071462118173 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.13953565878 0.151781067708 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.048874874849 0.0609392437508 80% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.6 12.6369458128 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 53.1260098522 120% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 10.9458128079 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.79 11.5310837438 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.36 8.32886699507 100% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 55.0591133005 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.94827586207 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.3980295567 81% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 65.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 58.5 Out of 90
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