If you are assigned to work on climate change what will you choose to focus on and why?
One of the most conspicuous trends of today’s world is a colossal upsurge in a number of factors which cause environment degradation. There is a widespread worry that climate change is an adverse impact on current industrial processes and it has become an inevitable phenomenon to consider. If I have to do a research on climate change, I will pay my attention to industrialisation.
There are numerous factors in favour of industrialisation. The most preponderant one is that in order to pollutants throughout from the industries and large amounts of factories cause arduous adverse impacts on ecology. Not only does this industrialisation make harmful effects to the environment, but it also leads to the health degradation and deterioration of humans, animals, and whole nature. Needless to say, these demerits stand environment in good stead, as far as improving human’s health and long life.
Another pivotal aspect of this is lack of wastage management. Besides, responsible to overcome the issues of industrialisation, it is essential to pay attention to the garbage coming out from the industries. Hence, it is apparent why should I focus on this matter in my research.
In view of the argument outlined above, one can conclude that the drawbacks of industrialization to the flora and fauna is too dire to ignore.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'research'.
Suggestion: research
...phenomenon to consider. If I have to do a research on climate change, I will pay my attent...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, hence, if, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 10.5418719212 85% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 6.10837438424 49% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 8.36945812808 84% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 5.94088669951 67% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 20.9802955665 76% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 31.9359605911 119% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 5.75862068966 260% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1129.0 1207.87684729 93% => OK
No of words: 214.0 242.827586207 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.27570093458 5.00649968141 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.82475343497 3.92707691288 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.49735372803 2.71678728327 129% => OK
Unique words: 134.0 139.433497537 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.626168224299 0.580463131201 108% => OK
syllable_count: 360.9 379.143842365 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.6157635468 87% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.931034482759 215% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 3.65517241379 27% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6551724138 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.5024630542 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.6153087614 50.4703680194 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.636363636 104.977214359 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.4545454545 20.9669160288 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.0 7.25397266985 41% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.33497536946 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 6.9802955665 57% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 2.75862068966 254% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 2.91625615764 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0688061544526 0.242375264174 28% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0248649524571 0.0925447433944 27% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0411739970988 0.071462118173 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0366155085287 0.151781067708 24% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0392280634971 0.0609392437508 64% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 12.6369458128 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 53.1260098522 82% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.9458128079 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.34 11.5310837438 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.52 8.32886699507 114% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 55.0591133005 122% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.94827586207 90% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.3980295567 92% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.5123152709 95% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.1111111111 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 10.0 Out of 90
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