The mass media including TV Radio and newspaper influence our society and shape our opinions and characters. What is your opinion?
The importance of mass media like tv, newspaper and radio was always been a debatable issue, but now has become more controversial. Even though, many people believe that mass media plays a vital role in our life. While, other rejects this notion and claim that mass media plays a significant role. I would further like to elaborate both sides of the essay with reasons and lead to a plausible conclusion.
There are myriads of reasons which will further explain this argument but the most preponderant one stemming to the fact is that mass media like tv, newspaper and radio have influential character. Nowadays, young generation is very inclined towards mass media as it is basic source of entertainment for them. It helps them to approach world in an easier way and in lesser time. mass media plays an important role and it also shaping our society in a way for betterment.
It is helping young generation in many ways. children of today's generation can explore the world in one click and television helps them in many ways like there are so many general knowledge , competitive shows for children to explore themselves and work for better. News channels keep everyone updated from world's point of view. radio also keep everyone updated with regard to day to day activities in that particular region and elsewhere.
After the aforementioned opinions, i have come to the conclusion that mass media plays an important role in pivot to shape the society .
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: Mass
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Suggestion: Children
... helping young generation in many ways. children of todays generation can explore the wo...
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Message: Possible agreement error. The noun knowledge seems to be uncountable; consider using: 'much general knowledge', 'a good deal of general knowledge'.
Suggestion: much general knowledge; a good deal of general knowledge
...lps them in many ways like there are so many general knowledge , competitive shows for children to exp...
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Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...like there are so many general knowledge , competitive shows for children to explo...
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Suggestion: Radio
...yone updated from worlds point of view. radio also keep everyone updated with regard ...
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Message: This phrase is duplicated. You should probably leave only 'to day'.
Suggestion: to day
... also keep everyone updated with regard to day to day activities in that particular region an...
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Suggestion: .
...rtant role in pivot to shape the society .
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, while, with regard to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 10.5418719212 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 6.10837438424 49% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 8.36945812808 131% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 5.94088669951 101% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 20.9802955665 91% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 31.9359605911 100% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 5.75862068966 122% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1222.0 1207.87684729 101% => OK
No of words: 246.0 242.827586207 101% => OK
Chars per words: 4.9674796748 5.00649968141 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96035189615 3.92707691288 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64938686877 2.71678728327 98% => OK
Unique words: 139.0 139.433497537 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.565040650407 0.580463131201 97% => OK
syllable_count: 382.5 379.143842365 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.6157635468 87% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.65517241379 27% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6551724138 103% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.5024630542 88% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.8205262874 50.4703680194 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.0 104.977214359 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.9230769231 20.9669160288 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.07692307692 7.25397266985 42% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.33497536946 131% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 6.9802955665 129% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 2.75862068966 72% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 2.91625615764 69% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.207292513677 0.242375264174 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0760513218035 0.0925447433944 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.076581881447 0.071462118173 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.13595038197 0.151781067708 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0768467177846 0.0609392437508 126% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 12.6369458128 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 53.1260098522 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.9458128079 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.55 11.5310837438 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.06 8.32886699507 97% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 55.0591133005 100% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.94827586207 111% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.3980295567 88% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.5123152709 105% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 72.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 65.5 Out of 90
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.